Hi guys, I design product pictures for e-commerce platform Similar to ebay. This is one of my product photo. What do you think of it?

I'm not a designer but I'm a frequent online shoppers

Good on top but too crowded at bottom

Maybe black background?

Some more usually sellers put few different photos not lump into 1 picture

This is just the main product photo.
The product details is in the description here
https://hhmkl.com.my/product/battery-charge...nk-drive-13000/

What do you think of the whole thing?

I think the way all those information are presented can be better. For example you can group all the information about "Start" at one place and about "Power Bank" on another. Currently they are all mixed-up together and it's a bit hard to make a sense of it all. I also would advice make email address into one single line instead of two.

That's a lot of information on the poster. Would suggest to make a second poster to spread out the info a bit more. Is kinda hard to digest all the info on the bottom of the page.

Thanks for the feedback

Positioning is ok, but like many other's had point out, too much noise .....

You don't need to repeat one feature for 4 times.

Is quite crowded maybe you can have the picture and words separately but still in the same page ?
They are quite near to each other don't really know where to focus at 1st sight

i agree with most of the comments, seems crowded & messy at the info area..
user who read it may feel confused..
there are no direction which to see 1st, which to read first..
you should arrange it nicely with 'hierarchy' - which is top priority, 2nd, 3rd, bla bla bla..

i would suggest you to put..
• the Logo Brand (i guess is TELWIN) & the main Title of The Product on top (in 1 line if possible)..
• then the main product image is ok..
• then the 3 images of the functions → START | POWERBANK | LED LIGHT (in 3 columns arrangement)
• then other infos arrange also in 3 columns follows the 3 images above it..
so it seems clean & organized in 3 column grids.. easier for reader..
• last part at bottom, for Contact..

when we manage to arrange information in poster design for product nicely, we made readers / buyers easy to understand the product and make decision to buy..

just an opinion