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This post has been edited by Wifi_One: Apr 20 2007, 09:18 PM

nice pics there.. 5th pic over exposed i think.. 6th pic blur blur..

aiks... forgot one post limited to 6 pics... overiden already

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u call this hot? urm...

well.. most of the hot ones i cannot post lah... later the model &%$^ me...

teaser.

some of yr pics are over exposure or under exposure...anyway, good try

Hot not necessary less clothes.

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/6692/dsc1934lh6.jpg

hmm....

Hmm ... going out now, will tembak you pic by pic when I get back

some shots are blur.

Hello Wifi_One ... as promised, I will tembak you pic-by-pic but before that I will post some T&C : In no way I am attacking the model, she looks good but I will only concentrate in helping you to IMPROVE for now :

Pic 7 - I dunno what the heck is that, what the image is trying to convey and what the model wanna express. Seems like she's giving the expression of "Cheh! Holansi-meh, I go there slap you then you know!"

Pic 8 - With a huge escalator cuting thru the back of her head and she about to insert a chopstick into her nose? Wh...what does that shot trying to convey?

Pic 9 - So she's a smoker? Or she's taking a break during the shoot? Either way you need to work on the image to make it contain some impact.

Pic 10 - She blinked when you took that shot?

Pic 11 - Blur shot and overexposed ... and her laced bra is showing thru her top. Never post these kinda shots, there's no meaning to it. Post processing didn't help much either.

These are not '2 Cents' ... these are advice given from my experience as a model photographer and the MAIN idea of shooting a model is to make her LOOK GOOD. Failed that and you fail the entire attempt of shooting her in the first place. Take these comments casually and practice more.

Practice makes perfect

no boo geh? haha ..bro.. are u gam yu lou ar?

the escalator u do lit up the subject
but the bg has gone

time to invest on the lighting system

This post has been edited by shinchan^^: Apr 21 2007, 07:34 AM

wah sifu has spoken already... thanks for the advices... me also startes trying out different subject shooting...

what i found out shooting people compared to still object is .... it much more difficult to get the right shot at the right time.. looks lke i still got to practice more and more.... lol

yaya.... that lansi pic i asked her to epxress lansi .. like boh chap f&%^ u attitude.. kekeke...

most of the shot i posted are actually not perfect.. most of them are blur in ori form.. i was hoping to post process them into usable shot... kekekeke still learning to ho cover up blur n out of focus shots.. kekekeke those usable no need edit so much...

any ideas on how to touch up unsable shot to become usable? i was testing out sephia (most of the pics) to c whether can 'disguise' them into usable work of art.. lol....

yepp.. i lit up the bg cos not very interesting... trying to make it as bright as possible without distorting the subject...

all the pics i play with brightness... some higher and some lower..

invest in lightning system ah.... bo lui....

it doesnt work at all.

Try shot better next time

The concept of still life and portraiture is two different animal. One requires precise metering and focus and the other requires good composition and exposure, not that one is more superior that the other but you have to put more effort in them.

Expression is very important in model shoots, it's above good compo and even exposure. A model can screw up her own image just by making a wrong move, the smoking one is a good example. One look and ppl won't know that it's a candid shot of her really smoking or it's just a contructed pose. You have to be careful what you shoot and what you wanna show your viewers.

Lastly, dun disguise your bad shots, make good ones on-the-spot. Like they always say ... get it right the first time, dun turn shit into gold.

Dun 'play' with anything, get it right the first time

Nice points there.
Dont you guys feel that the chic seems like umh , old and stressed out ?
*maybe this is due to Wifi_one advice of expression again.

This post has been edited by Andy0625: Apr 22 2007, 01:46 AM

You guys wanna see strong expression? Check out Radical's pics, he shot his own girl all the time : Coordination bagus, expression superb, posing good ... learn from him. And she's not even a model.

Correct me if I am wrong, Radical.