how about move the model to paris? new york?
ahha jkjk

apa ni..
anyway this is not a pure photography dedicated forum

This post has been edited by shinchan^^: Oct 11 2007, 01:48 PM

Travis : notice that most are 3/4 shots
maybe you can try shoot some full body shots nex time
Well it is not easy but can try

tumpang satu , magazine picture

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Added on October 15, 2007, 10:39 amtumpang 2
This one cannot, shoot also lazy


This post has been edited by shinchan^^: Oct 15 2007, 10:39 AM

one more

#7 what's with that batang thing? doesnt work at all
#8 next try to compose the model to the right side since she is looking at the left

if can Avoid direct flash ,
sometimes might causes the pic flat out

wow everything want to say kensim said it already

took off the watch. this is not watch ads

compo too tight.. u r trying hard with the 55-2000mm it seems

opps correction 55-200mm

pics are all under travis
ur flash sync is too fast to capture the exposure of the environment

flash < no flash

sweat
next year loh then re-try

once again you didnt manage to capture the atmostsphere of the pc fair as the background are all blacked out.

#4 lao my Dear Leng Yein, OOF joh

This post has been edited by shinchan^^: Dec 11 2007, 04:20 PM

probably ur unit being used as demo unit by the customers at the shop

hmm
#1
scene looks like totally unrelated to the others
maybe should shot the waiting chair or the rooftop of something

#2, #3, #4
the desaturation of the background looks like doesnt work

#5
hmm? what is trying to express here? the red gal getting suicide and the 2nd gal preventing her?

#6
Subject's colors flat out like paper cut and paste into the background

#7
Over exposed .. details loss

#8
abit shaky on this one

this is from the last series one woh
already cnc ma

hmm wrong timing

so many ppl went there
only travis post?