hey, i'm new to this, and so i really need constructive comments and criticism. fire away, make it specific for i'm looking to improve.
enjoy.

cousin's son, looking pensive.


closeup


backyard, stoning away


the urn is the focus


red strings, a black capo and a yellow hand


geometrical shapes and contrasting colours


WB,


WB again, i prefer a tinge of yellow, what say you?


overexposed flowers?


palm tree


This post has been edited by miraged: Apr 13 2007, 02:02 AM

try improve on composition, frame the main subject tighter so it will give impact... and try shooting when the sun shining it's golden light..

closeups on orchids








again, WB issue





thanks for viewing, i need feeback, if u dont' mind.
thanks and have a good one.

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Added on April 13, 2007, 2:04 amwhich one u referring to diwant?

This post has been edited by miraged: Apr 13 2007, 02:04 AM

the flowers

trip to Sg, this is in muar.

'deep fried devil'




kueh/kuay/kuey teow and oysters


sg kuey teow


orchard


kaki lima


clarke quay at night


potrait shot (are they underexposed?)








This post has been edited by miraged: Apr 13 2007, 02:12 AM

willow tree


diamond beads


deco






oreo

Some pictures lack sharpness......i guess

IMHO, the dog pic need more DOF... sharpness is required... work on the composition more, take your time to study it and try different composition on a single subject.

right, which pictures lack sharpness? thanks for ur input. appreicate it.
ah, u're using a d70s also. sadly, my shots, compared to urs, are like comparing a meastro and a noob (myself)

composition is one thing i'm aware i lack. but before i move to compo, i wanna learn how to take good sharp pictures. need more DOF, meaning the dog should be more visible, and less of bokeh?
thanks for ur input.

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Added on April 13, 2007, 5:47 pmalso, judging by the responses, my pictures are not underexposed? hmm.. that's a PLUS for me
well.... i'll work on the sharpness of photos.
thanks.

This post has been edited by miraged: Apr 13 2007, 05:47 PM