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Mind to have a look at my portfolio?, Hope you find it useful
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TSWilsonQ
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Sep 19 2017, 12:15 PM, updated 9y ago
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Hi, I made my online portfolio and seeking for your advice! Please have a look and tell me what do you feel? YuFong Quekwww.yufongquek.com Feel free to ask me if you have any question in your mind too!
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internaldisputes
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Sep 19 2017, 04:11 PM
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i thought it's perfect! i love the blog idea. it makes your portfolio more human and personable.
my suggestion would be to include a brief description on your projects like your thought process and whatnot instead of just putting pictures.
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TSWilsonQ
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Sep 19 2017, 08:34 PM
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QUOTE(internaldisputes @ Sep 19 2017, 04:11 PM) i thought it's perfect! i love the blog idea. it makes your portfolio more human and personable. my suggestion would be to include a brief description on your projects like your thought process and whatnot instead of just putting pictures. Hey, thanks for your reply and your comment! I appreciate it!
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Noctis-Lucis
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Sep 29 2017, 12:57 AM
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You can add a mini video to show off a product and bring testimonials for life. It is an effective way to increase customer engagement.
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carmenyta
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Sep 30 2017, 11:53 AM
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I like the whole Gatsby feel.
Personally I feel the intro title is too in my face. If you can add in a few images or a slideshow of your works at first load, it will definitely attract your client's attention more.
This one is more of a very personal touch to me but try to give a space of two before and after your wordings in the yellow ochre backdrops (the YUFONG, industrial designer and your . Otherwise just ignore this piece. hehe
The "dedicated to creative thinking... " you try bolding it and see if it's easier to read. Or you try making the background lighter.
your portfolio_entries/design page the last box on the bottom right is driving me nuts. if you can make it all look uniformed that'll be great for you.
I think your loading button, you can change to one works. Too much show of your brand is hard selling and it can get annoying. I see it takes quite some time to load. You might as well show them what you're made of.
Sorry, I'm petty that way. Haha
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TSWilsonQ
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Oct 5 2017, 03:08 PM
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wow, I glad you guys commented! lovely thanks!
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chinglingfong89
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Oct 11 2017, 01:36 AM
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i feel the fonts are a lil too big. some visuals may work better
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ShadowR1
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Oct 12 2017, 02:53 AM
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Im not in design or anything close to it but you are highlighting too much.
Stay with the origin.
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Cece Lizard
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Nov 27 2017, 05:30 PM
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could b a lil more short n simple? n erm... mayb the overlay transparency could b higher...
ps: my personally feel~
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Kekikan
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Dec 4 2017, 03:58 PM
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QUOTE(WilsonQ @ Sep 19 2017, 12:15 PM) Hi, I made my online portfolio and seeking for your advice! Please have a look and tell me what do you feel? YuFong Quekwww.yufongquek.com Feel free to ask me if you have any question in your mind too! Great job on the website! How are you sharing this with your potential clients? Some comments (just my thoughts): (1) Title page with brand name a little too big and jarring. Maybe decrease the size of the font? (2) I like the colour scheme! Although the highlighted parts in "My name is YUFONG" and "I'm an INDUSTRIAL DESIGNER" is a bit excessive. No need to highlight... (3) Perhaps a brief description on each project to give your audience more info. Hope this helps!
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