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TSshrumpish
post Aug 10 2017, 01:16 AM, updated 7y ago

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Here's the link to the comic. Constructive and destructive comments are welcomed. :|
I know the topic has been heavily discussed before, but I try to focus on the drawings to make it funnier.

link: Komik Ginjal - Earphone Baru

This post has been edited by shrumpish: Aug 10 2017, 01:17 AM
jonoave
post Oct 2 2017, 01:06 AM

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It's ok for beginning. But nothing really special or that draws my interest personally, I didn't even crack a smile.

Artwork and drawing looks between average to slightly above average, shows quite a bit of effort and not lazily put together. The main thing I would probably suggest is to improve on the plot or punchline.

Good luck!

 

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