im no writer..nor am i someone who desperately seeks the attention..but i do wanna know the quality of my shitty language..so please feel free to gimme a pointer of two..
http://stringsonben.blogspot.com

its only base on one activity of my life...got some further plans for it..but for now i wish to know my writing quality

thanks

I can't comment much on your writings because you have more pictures and videos than your writings. I think you can put more attention on your grammar and more formal words and punctuation.

That's all I can say... Anyway, good blog. 6 out of 10 rating.

yea i read back my 2 post..i notice i mispelled stuff..thanks for noticing..

years of IRC/ICQ/msn makes ur grammer like shyt...

Just try to blog more, your style of writing will eventually change when you blog. After 6 months of continuous blogging, in foruming also I type full sentences.

It looks like you're quite the yoyo fanatic.

Why not start a Malaysian yoyo blog surrounding your personal life?

its actually part of my job part time la..
i actually got some plan for it..the only problem is i dont really like blogging...but this blog helps me keep track of me slacking

mind sharing/eleborating more on wat you mean by malaysian yoyo thingy?sounds interesting

Blogging is one thing, learning how to write is another. You gotta start reading more books, blogs that are well written.Spelling mistakes can be avoided by using spell checking software, etc.

Agreed. Blogger already have a spellcheck function so no worries, just that it is US English.

Your English can prove as you blog but you will have to try to improve yourself first. Meaning you should start using less abbreviations. Don't use too much..u..4 u.. those kinda things.

Depending on the blog, some people like entries short and sweet. Some like to read around the bush and where'd you end up.

You could always type in MS Word and get instant help from there. Just note that the software isn't perfect as well so at times I'd rely on the phrasing of the sentence. You will know if it sounds right or it sounds wrong.

As for the yoyo thing, I'm saying that you could start a commercially viable Malaysian yoyo blog. A blog all about yoyo but the audience are Malaysians..kids and teens especially. This is a great market because they would read your blog often.

Anyway, when you make it famous don't forget to treat me to a Paddington Pancake House latte.

Cheers.

yea i tend to use "u" at time..i do change them but sometimes i miss it..as i always blog when im partly sleepy...

haha when and IF it gets famous a drink...no prob
having a plan is 1 thing..knowing when to initiate and have the time for it is another,..doing so many stuff at once in life is a killer...not to say i dont have the time..just too tired to do anything..if u know wat i mean.