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TSsinan3d
post Dec 14 2006, 10:49 AM, updated 19y ago

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smile.gif hello everyone... i recently posted in "3d work" but now im starting my own thread..

first of all, is it ok to have a WIP thread over here?

a lil description about this neeserc project:

i wana create a transformers robot from our national satria neo car. my target is to make it look like one of those g1 but detailed tranformers..

here is my work progress so far..

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autobots... transform and roll out smile.gif

c&c most welcomed smile.gif

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post Dec 14 2006, 10:52 AM

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Nice work there rclxms.gif
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post Dec 14 2006, 11:19 AM

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an autobot Neo??decepticon Perodua next maybe??impressive work there..
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post Dec 14 2006, 12:52 PM

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original!!

proportion critics!! your hand and arm is pretty off balance.. try refer some G1 transformers but IMHO, the bumble bee is very close to yours.
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post Dec 14 2006, 12:59 PM

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tukar color la bro
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post Dec 14 2006, 01:07 PM

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the hand looks abit cacat.... refer Gundam's Perfect grade model if u can that would really help.
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post Dec 14 2006, 03:37 PM

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nice artwork... thumbup.gif

try to change the color, the hand shape seems kinda small, but overall, good... keep it up man... wink.gif
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post Dec 14 2006, 05:42 PM

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this reminds me of 'Jazz'.. did you follow that autobot? o.0
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post Dec 14 2006, 06:40 PM

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Yea the colour need to be more aggressive... change the tailpipe to make better guns...
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post Dec 14 2006, 09:25 PM

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QUOTE(etsuko @ Dec 14 2006, 05:42 PM)
this reminds me of 'Jazz'.. did you follow that autobot? o.0
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I second that the visor really remind me of it.. biggrin.gif
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post Dec 14 2006, 10:49 PM

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nice artwork..

i think it would go better without the "plate number" when its a robot...

and does the the car's door is the wing for the robot..
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post Dec 15 2006, 10:00 AM

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Technically, there's no transformers G1 with wings if I recall correctly. Even if they had wings, they'd be a bird-like creature and not a car. tongue.gif

Ikram, go watch more Transformers. LOL!

i dunno why.. but now I see the head as too small.. :\
TSsinan3d
post Dec 15 2006, 10:26 AM

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>>lil kazaam>> tqs smile.gif

>>apek>> ahakz.. dunno bout a decepticon.. me to finish this thing pun is something very hard for me.. smile.gif but si max_ady is doing a megatron i think.

>>onscreen>> tqs .. hehe. propotions??? hehe.. im weak at that.. i can take all the comments and advice possible. however, this neo would probably be a bumblebee type.. bearing in mind its a hatchback smile.gif

>>rio>> hehe.. wat colour u suggest? smile.gif im thinking that i want to make it one of the original neo colours.

>>ex-kay>> tqs for the comments.. yeah.. the tangan a bit off.. going to change it

>>lil_twist>> tqs smile.gif wat colour u have in mind? and yeah.. will baiki tangan

>>etsuko>> haha.. yeah.. i did refer to the head of jazz.. he was one of my fav transformers after prime and hotrod..

>>shinigami>> ahakz.. damn cool idea u got there.. really like it.. but itula.. ill try my best to make it happenn.. dunno if i can make it possible smile.gif

>>onscreen(again..hehe)>> yupz.. the trademark visor.. smile.gif

>>ikram_zidane>> i think the plate will become a W** **** number.. hehe.. but i dunno if im going to dispose it when it becomes a robot.. anywayz. tqs for the idea. and about the wings.. its not really a wing.. personally, i just kinda like the doors to open like that.. smile.gif

>>etsuko>> tongue.gif hehe as i mentioned.. propotions is one of my weaknesses.. tqs tor the comment

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tqs for the c&c guys.. this is my first time doing a robot.. hehe.. so yeah.. im doing my best to get the best of this neoserc project.. not much updates for today..
just testing some new hands and im planing to change the elbow.. looks tooo kurus la.. ishk smile.gif

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>> the render is not a final one.. the brazil renderer doesnt detect these narrrow edges and it bcomes dirty.. i plan to change it to mental ray soon smile.gif

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post Dec 15 2006, 10:31 AM

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Holy cow bro! U got skillz thumbup.gif notworthy.gif

A more "garang" color would be better tho...
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post Dec 15 2006, 12:40 PM

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liquid_ooze>> tqs smile.gif hehe.. will do something about the colour.. but for now.. just doing some test render.. my first IBL(image based lighting) try.. guna hdri.. what do u guys think smile.gif my personal opinion.. the reflection kat tingkap tu macam takde..hehehe..

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post Dec 20 2006, 03:44 PM

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omg..
imagine a satria stop beside u and suddenly become transformer
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post Dec 20 2006, 05:32 PM

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great imagination bro..& nice modelling 2 rclxms.gif
but nmpak scary-little-mary type robotla org jahat x takut... tongue.gif
but great effort..

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post Dec 21 2006, 05:54 PM

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the types look very fake, look lazy to model just use image to mapping???? and the neo infront big behind small, is that no follow blueprint to model?
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post Dec 21 2006, 09:11 PM

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>>boomer86>> haha.. cant wait for the movie to come out..(eventhough sgt kecewa they change all the robots)... new trailer dah keluar! looks kinda gempaq!

>>losd>>hahaha!! jambu punya robot.. tongue.gif tqs for the support.. actually ni first time model anytype of robot or character smile.gif

>>fansoption>> tqs for the crits.. smile.gif "tyres" ( not TYPES like u said above tongue.gif - took me sometime to paham what u wanted to say) not hard to model the tyre(done it before for myvi model) ... smile.gif but poly count will grow massively! >>maybe ill model it last.. ahakz..
yeah! u got that one right .. no blueprints.. can find for me ar? even the pamplet one takboleh pakai.. anywayz.. i already baiki as much as my eye kata betul... tqs again for the crits smile.gif

someupdates soon.. ive changed a lot especially the joints of the elbow.. look like can patah!

ciao.. enjoy 3d, enjoy life smile.gif


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post Dec 24 2006, 12:00 AM

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nice...it's got some binaltech feel to it smile.gif what program are you using again?? can share the model ar? tongue.gif i'm curious to see how your transformation pivots would be like...
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post Dec 24 2006, 12:06 AM

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what can i say?
nice!
nice rims too! drool.gif
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post Dec 24 2006, 07:52 PM

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WOW !! good job bro ... rclxms.gif notworthy.gif
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post Dec 24 2006, 08:10 PM

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the side door part...looks odd to me....but good effort....should be better next time
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post Dec 25 2006, 05:33 AM

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ahhh - doesn't that arm look familiar? biggrin.gif looks like it's based on Binaltech moulds. smile.gif


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post Dec 26 2006, 01:32 AM

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QUOTE(sinan3d @ Dec 15 2006, 12:40 PM)
liquid_ooze>> tqs smile.gif hehe.. will do something about the colour.. but for now.. just doing some test render.. my first IBL(image based lighting) try..  guna hdri.. what do u guys think smile.gif my personal opinion.. the reflection kat tingkap tu macam takde..hehehe..

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Your IBL is not happening dude.

First off, I think your car would benefit from a bit more of a reflective surface.

Second of all, I think your bg plate is a little bit too flat and grey.

Thirdly, I'm not too sure if the HDR image you're using matches the bg and environment.

Also, your focal length for the bg and the car is different, so it looks wierd now.

Hope this helps.

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post Dec 26 2006, 03:20 AM

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nice updates... like the rims so much... drool.gif
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post Jan 4 2007, 08:31 PM

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grouchy_smurf>> tqs.. yupz, its much based on the binaltech toys.. hehe.. em.. regarding the model.. dont think i can share.. too much effort pun into it.. however we can probably meet up and ill show u how its done >> huhu.. bear in mind.. im also trying to figure out how im going to transform it smile.gif

zenix>>tqs smile.gif glad you like the rims... first time jadi model rim after attempts and attempts to model one.

b0bba>> tqs bro smile.gif

soul_patrol>> tqs for the comments.. will take note.. and i agree.. next time will be better.. you can check out my portfolio at CARS @ sinan3d.com ... hehe.. you can c the kelisa model is very2 beginner smile.gif

goldfries>> yupz.. binaltech wink.gif

Diazepam>> tqs sooo much for the comments.. will work on the next hdri compositing that ill do

lil twist>> tqs smile.gif


ok guys, here is an update.. its almost complete on robot mode.. now to transform it.. what do you guys think about the new colour?


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cNc very much appreciated ! smile.gif


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post Jan 4 2007, 09:07 PM

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Wah ur car model very nice ler thumbup.gif
The robot u shud give us more shots.. Different pose biggrin.gif
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post Jan 5 2007, 03:04 AM

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hrmm. your top part look like based on Subaru / RX8 binaltech moulds.

but the legs, look like based on either the Corvettes or the S2000. smile.gif
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post Jan 6 2007, 01:57 PM

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awesome... great effort there... wud like to see more shots... (also wud be darn nice to see it actually transform) biggrin.gif
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wow..nice one...you should be in the transformers movie team
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post Jan 6 2007, 05:05 PM

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Hah, TOA final year project I guess. Nice going!
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post Jan 6 2007, 08:14 PM

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omg thats so awesome, you should do an animation on how the car will transform IMHO
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post Jan 7 2007, 02:19 PM

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QUOTE(Klesk @ Jan 6 2007, 08:14 PM)
omg thats so awesome, you should do an animation on how the car will transform IMHO
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i second that...
Very very nice 3d model. Good job man.
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post Jan 23 2007, 08:00 PM

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omg, how long did u take to make it?
and wat program u used?
hope u dun mind sharing it
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and ur work really nice
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post Jan 24 2007, 06:05 PM

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smart but kurang garang, put some underground vinyl maybe?
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post Jan 28 2007, 10:48 AM

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nice job.. why not try rig it and do a test animation of it transforming?
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post Jan 29 2007, 05:30 PM

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just a little something.. not much progress

thumbup.gif cant wait to hear ur opinions regarding the transformation method

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