The soundtrack is very suited. Good job with synching the beat with the animations.
I simply love the slow 3D revolution combined with the hig-res character model. Just as good as the official dota 2 movie.

Just a few things I notice are:
- the text overlay a little flat. I think if its gradient and given a shadow would pop out the text more from the 3D background.
- the poetic words have too much WILL in it.

Otherwise, great video!