This thread is a no holds barred critique of a photo. Just say whatever comes to mind, suggest techniques, etc, etc, etc, so that the photographer may improve.

Let me start.

(Takes a deep breath)
I'm ready...let the flaming begins.

#1


#2


Sorry, had some problem with the imagehost. Rectified, hopefully.


This post has been edited by gold3knight: Oct 17 2006, 09:10 PM

Anything goes.

thank you thank you. Yes all shot by me. #1, was purposely underexposed -2ev if i remember correctly. Shot from within my car on a rainy day, so the marks were water droplets. I must admit that composition is lacking.
#2, my first attempt to capture what clemong_888 did. There were no shade around. I've already dailed down the f-stop (f/36), set to ~-2ev, set to iso100, fixed my pl filter. (Need to get a sunglass for my lens). That's why you could see some gray spots on the water (those were dust on the sensor filter, hence my request for help in the canon fans thread regarding sensor cleaning). as for composition, lacking as well . I cropped it from a larger photo.
also, my skills like is like a wave, comes and goes.

This post has been edited by gold3knight: Oct 17 2006, 10:51 PM

trying for a gloomy look , obviously failed at that.

sensor cleaning

Copper Hill Images - CCD/CMOS Cleaning

This post has been edited by gold3knight: Oct 17 2006, 11:10 PM

need wider lens for interior photography, also, should have turned the tv off.

waiting for yours too.

too much ps, looked unnatural, also the jpg seemed to be compressed too much
try in colour, and accent the colour of the cage
if the steps could be sharper, then super.

i brought it on myself.
must learn to keep my mouth shut with kids nowadays

can't click on 2)

hahaha, once seen ghost, become afraid of darkness.
I just want to see what you took. I won't comment on your photos anymore.

telling you what you did wrong is advice, comment is just saying nice or not nice.
which one do you want?
your subject is a nice dog. but does not really stand out.

wow, you guys went and dig up this old thread.
i want to delete all my old photos already.

feel like migrate to other place.

why the secrecy on the forum names.

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This post has been edited by gold3knight: Apr 9 2007, 01:34 PM