Hi everyone. I am palnning to sing in one of my friends bday party and i did create a song but it sounds bad so i need you guys to help me create music and if the music is a hit i will post in on youtube and whoever wrote the lyrics will get their name appeared. I want rapping and chorus. Simple and nice about friendship. Thank you all and i appreciate your advice and help smile.gif cool2.gif icon_idea.gif icon_idea.gif icon_rolleyes.gif icon_rolleyes.gif cool.gif

Can u guys ammend it for me so its good thx


This post has been edited by regan96: Apr 3 2015, 06:15 PM

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This post has been edited by Kingcow: Oct 13 2021, 04:29 PM

when u say my first language is chinese ( i am nota chinese but an indian)
i wrote this very fast because my friends bday suppose to be a week after i wrote it but now its going to be like in june

Try to fix the grammar first and in regard to the music, i'm willing to offer some tunes if u want but seriously fix the lyrics first.

friends aren't* important
They are selfish much more than selling fish(eh?)

there's more questionable lyrics in there so yea u need more work on it

good luck with it

right. Thx . i will get back to u once i am ready. Can you be my teacher for this please ?

this is my new lyrics, hope its better



Alright, okay break it now
Individuals say companions is not essential
Cash is considerably more imperative than companions
They don’t get what is life
They are all narrow minded
Considerably more than
Offering stupidity forever

Each living thing needs a companion forever
Nobody can live without a companion
Indeed littlest thing needs companion under control
Cause without companionship life is nothing but a waste of time

Right, an existence without a companion is
Meaningless, hopeless, friendless
Companion is there to cry with you, snicker with you, help you, grin with you
A friend indeed is a friend in need
You need adoration for your companion, sympathy and trustworthiness

You require a companion to loan you a shoulder
No one can be distant from everyone else in this world
Forever alone is the single word they use on you
Have an obligation of kinship with your companion



Written by: Regan