ok, story ok. a tad short, felt rushed. expand a little.
Need Honest Opinions on a Blog I'm Writing, Love story in Unconventional Format
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 Dec 28 2014, 07:59 PM
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read dy. so alisya is your waifu now? jelly
ok, story ok. a tad short, felt rushed. expand a little. |
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Dec 28 2014, 08:04 PM
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QUOTE(Far_76 @ Dec 28 2014, 08:03 PM) It's supposed to be a real story filled with words, not pics keep it up. interesting meeting with alisya in the bus, though didnt expect such to happen, but hey, it could afterall. Well I'm aiming for writing bits of story at a time which ends up with the ending. Maybe two posts per week. This is just the start of the story , but thanks for the feedback   |
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