In terms of the terms & sentences used in your post, I think is better than average and appropriate for a typical story writer with better standard.

I didn't read too much on the content but I think overall is not bad. Good for casual reading if people want to learn more about other people lifestyle.

I want to comment on the blog design. The widget used in your blog is quite basic, perhaps you want to search for something new and add somemore. The blog design is basically black, white & gray, which is a little dull. So you might want to look for a better template since your blog is about lifestyle, so adding some color into it could be better.