Hi , can u give some views of the above magazine and rate it

Thanks in Advance,

1.Rearrange ur price, edition blabla at the top...

2.Dont put page number on the cover

3.Writen is actually spelled written

4. Edition 0'6 should be Edition '06

where do i put the price and edition to?

why no page # in the mag cover har? noobie here..

and i think the leopard photo is kinda blur...

Put the price below the text 'September Editon'. In the white transparency rectangle box.

This post has been edited by zeist: Sep 6 2006, 11:27 PM

that's a lot of embossing.. lol

I think too many different font type... Maskhead must be large enough so that people could read what title is it from far...

Ya,...i agree with etsuko..too much embossing.

Dont have KDN number on the magazine??

you should space out the fonts texts. Its okay for the bolded title and bigger fonts size, but not for the smaller ones .
You have to imagine the magazine in the bookstand, and people are standing quite a distance away to read the texts on the front magazine, With the smaller texts all fonts space so near to each other, dont think its readable.

The bottom black strip with the wordings, the 'written by Wie Ching Theing' should be smaller or at least the same size as the line above it. And the texts shouldnt be placed to near to the edge. The publisher would have tough time trimming the books, and risking cutting too near to the texts.

'predator of the wild...' can still be a few more size bigger.

yup, modify the typography

text to close to each other, i mean the kerning

dun do so many drop shadows loh

title can move up a bit so that the leopard head wont get covered

thanks.....will edit abit ....