Very well done. very well done

Plant hey dude...
i wtb ur copyright for this story...

He could be a scriptwriter indeed. You can tell by he mentioning of working in Advertising agency. Well most production house will work with advertising agency for TVC mainly and scriptwriter has small role in it (depends on TVC duration) while bigger role in drama/telenovela/film. So this could be one of his story and could never be on the national screen (due to dildo2 story) and personally i think the story line is a good one. Cant wait for the next chapter.

this story more epic than my boss' mistress

This post has been edited by ChaNzy: Aug 1 2014, 10:25 AM

Fuuh..macam Malaysian version of Shades of Gray
Maybe this will become a trend in the future.
In b4, posting in potential legendary thread

Errr,I'm not satisfied on part 4,as a hero on ur story,you should able to repel at least two attacker(indian guy) using some knowledge Brazilian jujitsu and boxing background (say u learn in secondary school),or watched lyoto machida alot

Chapter 4 is too boring liao. If you keep having this irrelevant sub stories in incoming chapters you will lose fans for sure.

Sprinkle some smexy scenes in every cheaper lar.

Tv3 will spoil the the story la I think.

And planta, you need an editor!!!!

i missed part 2 and 3

dafuq did i just read...

submitted to ECD liao

rejected due to excessive obscene scene

gg

PArking~~

when chapter 5 ?

check the boss dialog got typo

and then totally is fake lor, so fake hahahaha

hmm chapter 4 getting unbelievable. reader count dropping.. i can feel it.

His blog link there got ma.

waiting for chapter 5...wah...so dramatic hor...at least still got can survive to write this

pokok... tak abis2 mengkuda

lol ~ sudden change style in chap 4 oO . . . . . .

tmd, chapter 4 , i thought got action, but not what i am expecting