It looks to me like someone diving through fire. The flames should perhaps follow the shape of the racquet so it completes the look. I'm guessing it's about HOT HOT HOT playing and power and impact. So follow that through with your font...something HARD HITTING and clear.


Make the 'swoosh' shape be aflame too, really catch the whole flow of a ball being hit, look at photos of tennis players in action, see their expressions and feel the power in their stroke, put yourself in their mind ..imagine being hit by the tennis ball at topspeed..then you'll be in the right 'frame of mind' to adjust the design.

Currently the flames are like a campfire, you need laser sharp, hyperactive flames that convey the HEAT and POWER you're trying to capture.

Hope this helps

Sofiah Emma

This post has been edited by sofiahemma: Aug 25 2006, 12:08 PM