well dont know if it will help, i read on net b4 that for movement, its batter if u compo it entering the frame not dropping out...ur pcs look like got framing problem...

just my 2 cents..

this is what i shot


well actually what i trying 2 say was the pcs telling the viewer whats next, where to go next or smth like that...

this is not what i shot but roughly the idea...
http://gallery.photo.net/photo/2998367-lg.jpg ( just jump into the frame, next is gonna land )

http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=3072048 ( getting ready to hit )

well just what i think la..mayb u wun like it cos diff photographer diff thinking..

yep...hehe..thats what i mean...cos its kind of fun to play with viewer mind..