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TSdarkandy
post Jun 8 2014, 11:05 AM, updated 12y ago

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Recently I updated and fixed many bug of my game show below, I'm going to make my third game soon rclxms.gif
At the mean time, I want to promo my game to everyone in this forum..... as a poor developer, I'm not going to spend the money in advertise my game....
I hope everyone can share this to your friend .. rclxm9.gif

thanks


Try these two game:




download : Bunny Rescue




download : Escapor






download : Duck Hunting Game

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dewill
post Jun 8 2014, 11:20 AM

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game play is nice but the layout need to redesign
TSdarkandy
post Jun 8 2014, 12:02 PM

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QUOTE(dewill @ Jun 8 2014, 11:20 AM)
game play is nice but the layout need to redesign
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can you be more specify which part of the layout need to redesign blink.gif blink.gif

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dewill
post Jun 8 2014, 11:43 PM

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QUOTE(darkandy @ Jun 8 2014, 12:02 PM)
can you be more specify which part of the layout need to redesign blink.gif  blink.gif
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totally
TSdarkandy
post Jun 9 2014, 01:01 PM

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QUOTE(dewill @ Jun 8 2014, 11:43 PM)
totally
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dewill
post Jun 9 2014, 02:06 PM

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as you compare your layout is not in between of android or IOS.
your layout < android < IOS. lack of shading and color focus.
TSdarkandy
post Jun 12 2014, 03:55 PM

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QUOTE(dewill @ Jun 9 2014, 02:06 PM)
as you compare your layout is not in between of android or IOS.
your layout < android < IOS. lack of shading and color focus.
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really...really......not very sure what problem .... sweat.gif sweat.gif
maybe you can provide me a sample to compare it.... tongue.gif tongue.gif tongue.gif
dewill
post Jun 13 2014, 09:59 PM

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QUOTE(darkandy @ Jun 12 2014, 03:55 PM)
really...really......not very sure what problem ....  sweat.gif  sweat.gif
maybe you can provide me a sample to compare it.... tongue.gif  tongue.gif  tongue.gif
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try to examine angrybird from previous until recent apps.
still maintain a very details 2D graphic layout.
digital.ark
post Jun 15 2014, 08:02 PM

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maybe game assets can be improve bro, you got the game concept already smile.gif
osiflex3000
post Jun 15 2014, 11:46 PM

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the game are quite leisure and fun. Like digital.ark said, u got the concept already.

i would suggest u to improve the graphics tho.

QUOTE(dewill @ Jun 8 2014, 11:20 AM)
game play is nice but the layout need to redesign
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Like he said, redesign. IMHO:

Bunny rescue - It would be great if the graphics is similar to pokemon emerald concept.
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Escapor - main ball and modifier balls need redesign.

Duck Hunting War - the "War" part not necessary and it doesn't give any meaning.
The graphics, rather than arcade style, why not funfair style? like the one in Despicable Me funfair scene.
The cardboard/box cut style. with a steel rod stick at the target and the machine(hidden under counter table to make the object move), and it moves around for you to kill.
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Game & Menu Buttons + Icons + Menu & Game Background need redesign. It is not attractive.
For graphics preferences for users/downloader/players, you also need to consider your target user age. (Is it 6+ y.o, young children, everyone, or everyone 10+) to attract more players and suit their likings.

Put achievements. Everybody loves achievement. thumbup.gif

I like your game, but i wont play long.

Don't take this negatively. I support local/independent game maker. Peace. icon_rolleyes.gif
grols
post Jun 18 2014, 04:26 AM

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In what environment you are developing this applications?
grols
post Jul 19 2014, 08:46 PM

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do you use android studio?

 

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