Nice phone there mate! 
New one?
I think your photo lacks a main focus, as in I'm not sure what you are trying to show with your photo if I didn't read your title
Next time try to use a clean background (remove the other phone, headset and Nikon bag), or blur out the background altogether with large apertures (either shoot at max focal length @F5.6, OR any short focal length @F3.5), so that the focus will be on the phone and box itself

snapshot like using handphones

is quite a bad shoot, you should see how other photographers shoot foods and products photography, learn more on composition and lightning

you can refer to goldfries's collection
http://www.goldfries.com/category/photogra...otoshoot-setup/
http://www.goldfries.com/category/photography/

anyway, keep trying and you will get better, it's not like i'm any better either, let's keep learning and improving together

Don't worry man, my 1st few thousand photos were very bad as well haha 
You'll slowly learn about composition, lighting and post-processing along the way~
In fact, its good that you have already started using LR while you learn your photography, more efficient 

I don't have any phone shots T___T
But I do have some camera shots. Just for your reference, I'm still pretty noob at this:




Keep it up~

I would advise that you read up about the basics of picture composition. Most importantly currently get to know your camera and its functions well. Like how to change a setting fast (on the fly). Ya taking lots of pictures really helps. After a while it will all just gel up and you will be taking good photos 

ChaosSixth no worries la.. im still snap shooting after 6 years  as long as you happi 

I think post-processing has become an essential part of photography already
The higher you go, the more processing work you'll learn and apply

Its very hard to produce a photo that stands out without any post-processing 

This is also one of the reasons why Adobe is being sued for "distorting reality" But this is life la haha... we all love Pacific Rim right? lol

Oh, this one only applies to girls I suppose.. or those in advertising haha
Personally I think man with pimples = manly     

first try on HDR out of camera function



really no idea what to adjust...

The rabbit shots are nice
I'm Penangite also haha
Where did you take those landscape shots?
Can see my housing area also haha 

Wah, 2nd house some more
Are you based in Penang? Did you went and see our own Malaysian Sakura? It was all over the news haha

Yeah, your landscape shots could use some improvements haha... I myself is not good at landscape shots too, since it requires both skill and equipment to get good ones
Usually for landscape shots you have to pick strategic places where you can properly compose your shots, with proper leading lines so that the resulting shot will be more attractive And of course, the weather has to be good as well haha... Most people take landscape photos during the golden hours- when the sun rises/sets.. that's when you will get the most colours out of the skies- very beautiful, especially if you have a camera with good dynamic range - a DSLR, which you already have

Just have to wake up early/ eat dinner late, then you'll get the shot

Anyways, not exactly a landscape shot haha, but a panorama:

Not bad, I like your 3rd shot the most. You didn't use a tripod or put on something stable?

Btw are you staying in a condo? Is it possible to access the rooftops of those buildings? Might be a better vantage point

Aww no wonder it looks bit blurry, will look better in vertical as well I think. With the lines of the city leading into the mountains

Ok, rabbit wins all!!!! 
Don't ever get a cheapo tripod.. at least get a Rm300 decent one like sirui which recommended by @[PF] T.J .. because I have bad experience of the free tripod that comes along with the DSLR. The tripod 'timber!'~ luckily my reflexes is fast enough to catch if not.. 

u deleted the photos, or reformated ur card. once u do that, ur pic file name will be back to DSC_0001.NEF