New series are actually not bad.
But i feel that it is spoiled by the way you crop it.
A lot of hands and legs being chopped off just right at the wrist and ankle.

Actually, when shoot in studio or some where with clean background it is better use smaller aperture like f8, f11 or even f16. The model from head to toes will be sharp.
Even if you mis-focus on model breast, it won't be so visible. .