QUOTE(razo2 @ Feb 6 2014, 07:47 AM)
Okay okay noted I will rework on it and give you a reply soon.
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few things I need to understand/clarify:
Since I have worked for a year+ after graduating, is my work experience that much important in securing an entry position? I understand that any improvement is a good thing, but do I need to stress on my academic performance since my current work experience has nothing to do with softwares?
Focus on what you can offer to be a programmer. Even there is a small task that you did in the previous job it is something that you can offer as a skill to sell. That was my point. There is no such thing as one industry that fits all.
Even experienced people have to learn new industry and skills as well. It is all down to your ability to learn quickly and apply those skills. That is what the employers are looking for. There is no sweet time learning a skill in a working industry. Learn to break from that mind set and you are highly in demand.
Objective:
Noted.
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Education:
Noted. Even if I work only for a year my CGPA isn't necessary? okay.
I was just pointing out that you must not show your bad grades when it is not needed. Focus on your selling points. I am sure you dont see a fruit seller showing his moldy stocks to you right?
Work Experience:
Noted. I never noticed the grammar mistakes. Is it the -ed's? Okay I will change that.
Regarding achievements, so I include the achievements after listing out some of the job's responsibility?
Yes. Not only it is a good method of summarizing, it also tells the potential employer what you had learned and which skills you could offer to them that is useful. It is all about selling yourself to the employer.
Personal particular:
Noted.
Skills:
Noted. Previously I followed the jobstreet's format which includes years. Is that better?
It is up to you. But I didnt bother to put the calculations in my resume. Usually I will just round it so it is easier to understand. No one really care if you add or minus a few months just to make things easier to read.
Languages:
Noted. thanks.
Activities:
I used to co-organize blood donation for my college. I think I shall include that?
Noted. I'll add certain interests. I do play ultimate frisbee which improves teamwork and logical thinking.
Scrap that warcraft 3 game thing.
Anything is better than a gaming hobby in a resume.
Academic Projects:
Noted.
References:
Sorry I've only had universities referees. Should I try to find a work referees? I'm afraid if I ask my boss as a referee, he could view me as a quitter and not be much kinder to me.
Here comes a nifty trick, learn to make friends outside work that is neutral or in favor to you. Usually your referees are trusted colleague or your clients. Plan who will be your referee, it is important to do so. Your boss is never a good thing to use as a referee until you finally get the job (when potential employers are already interested in you then bad boss is not an obstacle).
Most of them will bad mouth you in a very drastic manner. If you are in good terms with your boss then it is a good thing to add him. If they did bad mouth you, then play the neutral card. There is a lot of ways to talk your way out of this situation.


I've uploaded the newly edited version, kindly please check it out and give me feedback. Also regarding the work referee, I'm finding it difficult but I'm sure a few of my colleagues are willing to give the support I'm looking for.
I've also checked
http://www.rubyresumes.com and it certainly is very helpful.


QUOTE(quovadis123 @ Feb 9 2014, 04:01 AM)
brightjoey,
From the highlighted in blue,
Why do you think skill in programming is important?
Programming language is a language to communicate with machine. What dreamer learn is just a communication.
For example, I know how to communicate in Bahasa Malaysia since I learnt it since schooling time.
But my command in B.M is weak, but still I'm able to communicate with most people in B.M.
So, will I will improve my command in B.M ? No!
I will never good in BM for my entire life, just an average joe because I don't like.
In programming, you can use multiple method and algorithms to solve the same problems. For those dislike programming, they will only use one or two methods.
If the method can get the job done, then they are ok with it. They will never good at it.
For those like programming, they will continue for their entire life to find better way to solve it.
Like I said before, programming is just a tool of solving the problems. You need to know what field you really like.
In fact programming field are wide, there are software development, mobile computing, testing, architecture, analysis and very long list.
Let's say you are an expert in C programming(tool). But what field you want to enter with your profile?
Actually you still need a destination.
In fact, we already know programming is not for you. We don't want another average joe in this field. YOLO
You should in the field you really like! We want you to unleash your full potential, so, you will benefits to the world and society.
I understand your meaning. I have to do a little research on the available industries and soul searching. For now I'll temp. look for any jobs around my scope, cause I really want to leave my old job as the bosses and the culture isn't what I'm comfortable with, even after a year.
QUOTE(dreamer101 @ Feb 9 2014, 04:55 AM)
brightjoey,
<<You tell me your life story in how you painstakingly spend hours in your free time learning, I can assume a large portion of the time is also programming, but still you confess you DISLIKE programming, but you STILL learn and practice programming.>>
Yes, but I did not continue doing it because it BORES me. I learn enough to solve any problem at hand.
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In light of that, isn't working in a programming environment a ideal place to cultivate the skill? But I hoped in dealing with the different industries and enrolling myself into a Masters or PhD might make it clearer in what I planned to span my entire life on.>>
You do not get IT!!
You HOPE someone or some environment or some job will FORCE you into learning something. WHY?? If you are MOTIVATED , you will find TIME and ENERGY to get it done without any EXTERNAL FORCE. Now, if you are NOT MOTIVATED, those EXTERNAL FORCE will not help either.
<<enrolling myself into a Masters or PhD >>
This is CLEARLY a bunch of BS. ALL MIT, Princeton, Harvard university class lectures are FREE and AVAILABLE online. ANYONE with Internet access can learn from those lectures NOW. WHY are YOU not doing it now?? If you CHOOSE to DO NOTHING now, how does enrolling in any classes matter??
Those with will and determination will find a way. Others will find thousands of excuses.
Wake up!! Look at yourself in the mirror. What do you WANT out of your life?? Are you willing to put in THE EFFORT to get there??
Dreamer
If you're saying I'm heading down the wrong path, what is your recommendation I should do? If possible kindly be specific, and not too much open ended questions.
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