i'm new in website dev

here is my humble website.....

pls put ur comments....

Campus Inc Official Site

but till today only completed index page ini maaa... hehehe

err... i cannot enter the site oh..

err... no problem... i still can enter it...
do u mind to try it agin?

You only have the hompage, right?

wat the website abt?

it's only the main page right?

- too simple design

the cover's too rough..

erm.. is it just a web with yellow background and a magazine image by the side?

actually the page is about the the magazine content....

just would like ur opinion on the concept using yellow color...

the image too rough coz wnat to save time dloading the image... not too big

yeah the problem is the cover. Its kinda rough as ikram_zidane mentioned. Make a clearer version of it. And a suggestion of mine, try making those yellow balls to have more contrast to each other. Like for instance, from lighter color to darker color. Just something like that. Good minimalism btw

very bright.. arghh.. my eyes..

i'd make the magazine bigger so it stands out louder than the yellow more.

ok2.....
hhehehe.. actually i was so blur.. dunno wat the best i want to do... to many things come to my head
finally come wif this lousy idea... hehehe

one more.... my boss want to give w900i for free... how to make it attractive in website??
uisng pop up or.... any idea??

ask your boss to hire me or my team and we'll come up with an online campagin to giveaway the phone.

or better.. just give us the phone.

Design is simple, but I like the typeface though.

er... asked my boss about ur suggestion to make online promotion....
PM'ed u my boss number
even me can't have the phone!!!

This post has been edited by campusinc: Jun 11 2006, 01:40 PM

yep. would love the site if the magazine were bigger and look as the main focus.

ok2....
will try to change it...

called my boss or not etsuko??

hello all......
as u all comments before....
ihad made changes to my webs.....
pls help me and put ur comments...

hai.....

got comments for ur web edi???? hehehehhe

This post has been edited by aljebat: Jul 20 2006, 10:33 AM

I couldn't figure it's a magazine, all the time I thought it's only representing a leaflet. Maybe make a shadow to that "magazine" to make it look a bit real?

This post has been edited by Femi: Jul 20 2006, 11:00 AM

dun know how to comment...

everyone got their own views........
is it???

but for sure the content is so interesting!!!

This post has been edited by campusinc: Jul 22 2006, 07:18 PM

perhaps the magazine cover should be changed...
Overall ok. wouldn't it'll be too white for the bg?

the cover so bad a???

erm, seriously yea...

try put solid color like blue or black... too much orange element

thanks zeist.......

luv u!!!......

dun judge the book by its cover is it??

but in reality judge the book for the cover
no one will get attracted with lousy designs [no offense]
but I'm sure you can improve that cover way better than now

zomg to bright ... kinda ... my eyes god!!! btw nice

no emphasis on the title of your mag 'campus inc'. its too tiny to be noticed. it should stand out and be the first thing i see. not ogos06. :b

Yeah, I personally think you should darken the background, so the yellow section in the middle stands out. At present, it sunk it because the white is brighter than the yellow.

p/s: and i personally dont like marquees

ok i think it's better than the first design. So that's good news. And yeah another vote to darken the background.