Maybe make a shadow to that "magazine" to make it look a bit real?This post has been edited by Femi: Jul 20 2006, 11:00 AM
pls help me.. i'm newbie, put ur comment pls...
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 Jul 20 2006, 10:59 AM
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I couldn't figure it's a magazine, all the time I thought it's only representing a leaflet.
Maybe make a shadow to that "magazine" to make it look a bit real?This post has been edited by Femi: Jul 20 2006, 11:00 AM |
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Jul 20 2006, 01:40 PM
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   dun know how to comment... |
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Jul 21 2006, 12:45 AM
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everyone got their own views........
is it??? but for sure the content is so interesting!!! This post has been edited by campusinc: Jul 22 2006, 07:18 PM |
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Jul 21 2006, 02:10 PM
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perhaps the magazine cover should be changed...
Overall ok. wouldn't it'll be too white for the bg? |
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Jul 21 2006, 10:32 PM
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the cover so bad a???
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Jul 21 2006, 10:53 PM
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QUOTE(campusinc @ Jul 21 2006, 11:32 PM) the cover so bad a??? erm, seriously yea...   |
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Jul 21 2006, 11:14 PM
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try put solid color like blue or black... too much orange element
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Jul 22 2006, 07:19 PM
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QUOTE(zeist @ Jun 11 2006, 10:50 AM) Design is simple, but I like the typeface though. thanks zeist....... luv u!!!...... |
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Jul 22 2006, 07:20 PM
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QUOTE(eXPeri3nc3 @ Jul 21 2006, 09:53 PM) erm, seriously yea...  dun judge the book by its cover is it??  |
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Jul 23 2006, 05:00 PM
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QUOTE(campusinc @ Jul 22 2006, 08:20 PM) dun judge the book by its cover is it??  no one will get attracted with lousy designs [no offense] but I'm sure you can improve that cover way better than now |
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Jul 23 2006, 06:56 PM
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zomg to bright ... kinda ... my eyes god!!! btw nice
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Jul 23 2006, 07:13 PM
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no emphasis on the title of your mag 'campus inc'. its too tiny to be noticed. it should stand out and be the first thing i see. not ogos06. :b
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Jul 24 2006, 09:08 PM
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Yeah, I personally think you should darken the background, so the yellow section in the middle stands out. At present, it sunk it because the white is brighter than the yellow.
p/s: and i personally dont like marquees |
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Jul 24 2006, 09:18 PM
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ok i think it's better than the first design.
So that's good news. And yeah another vote to darken the background. |
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