giving me random crap about this one, help?
What is wrong with this magazine spread
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 Jun 8 2006, 02:15 PM, updated 20y ago
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I have a technical writer (bah)
giving me random crap about this one, help? |
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Jun 8 2006, 02:27 PM
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LOL the engrish SUPER POWDERFUL
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Jun 8 2006, 02:29 PM
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QUOTE(kev da man @ Jun 8 2006, 02:27 PM) LOL the engrish SUPER POWDERFUL Something wrong with the English? I don't know I just copy paste from that dude  I give him back to check the spelling etc and he demand a design change, while he is a technical writer |
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Jun 8 2006, 02:36 PM
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Too many languege.
Should be 2 version: English+ Malay English+Chinese Malay no grammar mistake but poor wording. Same to some english wording too. Not much designer can do if cause by poor content, will always feel something wrong wih the ads |
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Jun 8 2006, 02:37 PM
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They always demand 3 languages, put aside the language and wording stuff, what is wrong with the design?
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Jun 8 2006, 02:51 PM
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nothing too bad about it other than the poor layout which is a bit messy with the three languages and all.
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Jun 8 2006, 02:57 PM
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QUOTE(kev da man @ Jun 8 2006, 02:51 PM) nothing too bad about it other than the poor layout which is a bit messy with the three languages and all. What do you suggest so that I can improve the overall layout? 3 languages is a must, I know it is gay |
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Jun 8 2006, 03:00 PM
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for one, the large chinese letterings, should be made smaller, either replace it with english but not malay, then the descriptions could probably look better as a row under the bottles, and the girl.........wrong contact lenses...totally ugly.
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Jun 8 2006, 04:26 PM
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The gal look scary...
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Jun 8 2006, 06:46 PM
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i agree.. the girls looks plain scary.
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Jun 8 2006, 06:58 PM
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i agree, the girl looks scary
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Jun 9 2006, 08:20 AM
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haha.. the girls is scary~
em.. perhaps u can adjust the mandarin words on top there. Because seems like all the wordings are cramp below the picture |
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Jun 9 2006, 09:53 AM
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anyone have high res free stock image of a decent make up girl? I browse through deviantart thats pretty much I can find
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Jun 9 2006, 10:47 AM
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hhehhe... it's look alike funny ads....
sorry my english is not good... but the malay was directly translated from english.... |
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Jun 9 2006, 08:10 PM
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The girl... eh...
Other than that, it's quite dull in a commercial magazine. (For newsletters, it's OK, however.) |
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Jun 9 2006, 09:35 PM
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The girl gives me impression of Ju-on
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