The BoB theme song should use at the near ending.
Dialogues unemotional and too soft.
The explosion like cut and paste from somewhere else, notieceable shadow lines.
Characters movement too slow even they are tortoise, have you ever watch Ninja turtle?
Graphics could be leads more improvement by given more rendering time and disk spaces. (which you have to stop playing BF2 for quite sometime ).

The story is up to you, can't comment much.

the last scene, when aircraft bomb the place like "Tear of The Sun" movie hehehe .....
btw the animation not bad.... good job, but whu u used turtle ? is it ninja turtle ??