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william1 by MichaelChng, on Flickr


william2 by MichaelChng, on Flickr

Pic 1: William's pose is rather unflattering and also the post processing looks unnatural.

Pic 2: I feel bothered by the tilted looking windows and the empty space on the left is making the picture look not centered.

wow Dell guy..

on the first picture it makes him look short and cacat
in 2nd picture is like what 2nd poster said but i liked it

tone is nice. however model could have had a better pose i think.

pic 1 : would he look better if he leaned backward? it will look like as him more relaxed...

Great effort TS

I think the weird posture of William in the 1st photo is because of the chair haha. Like what the others have mentioned, a better posture would improve the photo alot

I like the 2nd photo. Although the photo can be taken (especially the windows) with more symmetry, but I like the overall feel that "it doesn't matter whether we are poor (or rich), it will be fine when we have each other" feel Just my 2 cents~

Thank guys.. I will remember all the comment and improve more

1st picture don't really like the harsh shadow lines on the bride's neck down...

Awaiting for more photos from you..