Wait a minute! That's namecard design...

How big is the namecard going to be..? The proportions look more like a website to me. And if that's really a namecard, don't be surprised you're going to have to do a lot of chopping later.

I'd opt for a simple format.

1 side has an image of one of the food with a short list of specialties or maybe a best seller cake.

1 side with the name of the bakery, it's tagline and the contact info.

In other words, you need a new design with the correct proportions.

i just find the height, a lil tall compared to the normal namecard.. hmm.. oh well..

I agree on this to a certain extent. But prompting any budding designer to not post their design to ask for a comment/feedback/review is just so typical Malaysian.

Yes, a designer should have confidence in their work but not asking anyone's view on it isn't a method of gaining confidence in your work less said helping the designer build up their education and confidence in this industry.

In college, designers prepare rationales for presentations. In university, designers prepare rationales and reports for presentation. Why are they put through this? It's because they're suppose to build confidence in research, development, theirk artwork and to have courage in speaking and accepting comments.

We're no longer in the era of Renaissance where every artist is hidden deep inside their tavern painting away a style that they've found on their own.

So in other words, sharing and being able to accept comments is a good method to improve oneself as a designer. If you hinder this fact, you shouldn't be calling yourself a designer.

Cheers.