In My Humble Opinion

i taught since u said it is a meteor, then it have to include some of meteors or the metaphor of meteor.. but i see all stars not to mention constellation. constellation is a group of stars so if you say it's a poster space constellation i might be liked it. but since it don't have an eyerest, it is pretty much and i don't know where to focus. try to apply the Rule of Thirds principle altough it is for photography techniques but somehow it is more understandable for beginner designers. ( saying this doesnt mean i'm an expert in design area ) and please, judging for this work and previuos2 work, i think you have to have a serious ideation on each theme for the project/assignment that you working on and work on some sketches before you compose you work to digital.

i'm saying this as you need comments/ratings to your artwrok but in the same time i also remind these things to myself also.



This post has been edited by momochi zabuza: Apr 17 2006, 04:44 AM