Here..my Collage Assignment..
whom work in Group with my frd..

we plan to come out a Poster SpaceMeteor..

need some rate..before we pass it up..
(dont bother my name)
see the Art..






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urm.. you need to fix the image linking..

same .. i see nothing ..

aek?!
where is da pic?
cannot c anything

why not upload it in free image hosting sites like imageshack

u got uploding prob issue here my fren

All I can see is SPAM. With 2 post in this forum.

Err , where's the image?

sorri sorri..
internet really f***ep up..

here my work!

This post has been edited by kokanchai: Apr 15 2006, 08:26 AM


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can i ask you something.. are you really a graduate in any way art-design related subject ??

can improve more..imho

Quite good i'd say.

erm.. i think it's average.. (but if u ask me to make it of cors i cant)

i think u shud improve more.. eniway.. gud luck..

there's no focus point @ subject ler...blur² only

yeah truly.. at 1st time.. i kerut2 dahi to focus my eyes..

try to put an attraction on the image n the blur part as background

In My Humble Opinion

i taught since u said it is a meteor, then it have to include some of meteors or the metaphor of meteor.. but i see all stars not to mention constellation. constellation is a group of stars so if you say it's a poster space constellation i might be liked it. but since it don't have an eyerest, it is pretty much and i don't know where to focus. try to apply the Rule of Thirds principle altough it is for photography techniques but somehow it is more understandable for beginner designers. ( saying this doesnt mean i'm an expert in design area ) and please, judging for this work and previuos2 work, i think you have to have a serious ideation on each theme for the project/assignment that you working on and work on some sketches before you compose you work to digital.

i'm saying this as you need comments/ratings to your artwrok but in the same time i also remind these things to myself also.



This post has been edited by momochi zabuza: Apr 17 2006, 04:44 AM

hmmm...where's the image?

here it is

Theme? As mentioned by some members above, the theme is meteor hence it should show some meteor showers, or at least a flying comet... Of course, it doesn't really have to be a typical meteor, you could use something else to portray a meteor.

For example, it depends on your idea of the illustration, and the "definition" of meteor that you want to portray in the illustration. Meteors are space rocks falling towards earth and gets burnt up in the atmosphere, so maybe your meteor can represent a destroyed spacestation crashing towards earth (or some sort of planet), with parts bursting into flames...

or just a simple meteor shower will do...

but nice photoshop