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 MY NameCard Design.., need some Criticism Feedback!

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sonictheory
post Apr 9 2006, 01:49 AM

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QUOTE(nada- @ Apr 8 2006, 12:29 PM)
Things to think of when designing a business card

CONCEPT CONCEPT CONCEPT. (all i see here is something alien-like and very unprofessional looking).

Where is your design principles you learned?Your use of typography is off, no spacing and spelling mistakes. Get a better and more legible typo la as well. I can read all your information and details but it also looks like you selected a random font and plonked it on. Spelling mistakes and mis-use of caps in wrong places.

Also your email looks very unproffessional (tyhoon_omega?), we aren't in high school anymore. Get a gmail with your name on it at least is much better. If your a freelancer I also think there is no need for an address. Unless you wish for your clients to come to your house?

Also you have way 2 many categories, just summarise it la. Its like those pool cleaning fellas who have a list of 10 things on their cards. If your a professional you never list down so many services.

Graphic and Multimedia Design - simple.

Overall to be honest you should just start a new design. Keep in mind also the number of colours u use.. at some places the more u use the more it costs.. if ur just beginning i wouldnt advise to do offset printing unless you have over 1000 people to give as it costs much more than a normal card.

Anyway keep at it la and try much harder.
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rclxms.gif well said


btw i've seen at name card with black background....chun...nice and clean...the logo thingy on ur right...if u really want it....reduce the opacity ...main object is ur logo and ur detail... the logo thingy tend to catch attention more than ur detail... keep it up! thumbup.gif

 

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