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 Rate My Game, Azimat Awang Miskin

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fruitie
post Apr 20 2006, 10:37 PM

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The visual is nice, a simple game but educational. smile.gif
I don't know how to comment on tht visual coz I'm not good in all this but I would like to comment on the story part. It has quite a number of gramatical errors, pls check abt them. smile.gif About the pepatahs, also have some kesalahan tatabahasa but very very minor, don worry. However, for ther story part it's pretty obvious.
Hope u don mind ya, I commented abt those parts instead of the visual.

 

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