job well done on the fun part certainly got the mood

#5 awkward bride face lol

#10 no comments on the photo but WHAT THE HELL WAS HAPPENING?! hahaha

#13 wondering what lens were u using? telephoto would be better to throw out the background. not exactly a luxury wedding of course

#16 careful with humans at the edge of a wide angle shot. the head on the right looks stretched

overall i like the composition. PP can be improve...the yellowish /retro tone is nice but perhaps not very suitable for a wedding