my 2 cents ...

#3 needs some skin smoothing ... the bride's face looks like got so many micro wrinkles, not flattering.
#5 i dunno why but the mother doesn't have a happy look on her face, so the photo is a bit odd. she looks borderline like bochup lol.
#10 having another photographer cover almost 1/4 of the frame ruings the shot for me.
#13 poor choice of angle - can't see the bride's face at all.
#18 is not a shot i would publish at all ...