Hi sifu sifu here..

Seem long time I didn't posted a album here however this time is a wedding dinner and this time will be first time I using multiple flash(strobing) for a dinner. I do receive some comment from another photographer why my photo look like photoshop due the object look like poping up or 3D. I hoping LYN phohotographer will give me some critics about it. I did not fully upload all photo however I will try completed it asap.
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fb1 by MichaelChng, on Flickr
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fb2 by MichaelChng, on Flickr
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IMG_9167-3 by MichaelChng, on Flickr
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IMG_1723 copy by MichaelChng, on Flickr
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IMG_1715 by MichaelChng, on Flickr

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FB by MichaelChng, on Flickr

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Chris1 by MichaelChng, on Flickr

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Untitled-2 by MichaelChng, on Flickr

This post has been edited by C.P.U: Oct 18 2012, 12:10 AM

Nice pictures.

Where was this dinner held?

Thanks.
Trader hotel Penang.

I like that, 3D suppose is bad thing?

Err.. I like it too but dunoe that particular photographer said this not call stobe.. hmm

stobe or not stobe
main thing the couple tat paid for ur services like it

Once I receive a critics, normally I will try solve it or improve it more unless the photographer that critics have is own taste

By strobing u mean u use static light stand with bounce flash?

I think the reason why it looked out of place is the diff WB between the subject and the surrounding as evident in pic1. I think gel should do the job

2nd pic, the face color looks weird, and do cut off the PA man.

The WB will be off due I do color adjustment, original color Wb is normal.

Maybe you did not realize, normally during dinner ceremony. There will be a lot coloful light splash on stage and there is green color light.. =/ that y is awkward.

More picture pls ..the 2nd pic n last pic is not bad .

Will upload more after i clear my another job to cost..

Technique is there. However, if you emphasize on the people besides the couple and the couple themselves to have connection (such as eye contact) then the picture will tell story by itself and become more believable.

#1: You can see 2 kids playing while the couple marches in, both elements doesn't look connected. Just an example.

Good luck!

will try again..

No worries. Just keep trying until you achieve what you want. You don't usually nail it the first time, but you can continue to practise to nail it.

Upload new photo by flick really sharpen my photo a lot

this is just my opinion ya,

*do take note that opinion is - another person's thought. meaning its what i think is nice, not u. and every artist has got their own trademark/style. u can choose to listen to my comments or just ignore it*

first of all, i like no 3, 4, 5, and 6.

no 3, 4, n 5 is a non-moving-subject. which makes it easier to compose and shoot. well, i like the tones, no 5's composition can be better.

no 6, the moment's there. well done.

for no 1 n 2, composition can be better. make full use of ur fullframe sensor using large apertures rocks more (imo that is )

i personally love to use of camera lightings. so i got nothing against that

all the best!

THANK!! I will take note on how the way I compo for next time..

New Pic added. CnC are welcome

Beautiful!

Thanks..

Nice and clean shot

Thank however there is much much more to improve