What do you think of this... It's for my school magazine with the title 'cahaya'. I'm no pro as you can see so need your advice or comments to make it better (got a lot of pressure!! ) Anyway, forget the badge on the cover.. just testing!!


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By the way, i'm using photoshop!!

I prefer the 2nd image but think the typeface could be better.

Can i ask where u get the pics?

are you designing a magazine for your school ?? i don't think both designs reflect the school identity.....

i think the second one is nicer..

anyway, the design isn't much different from your school yearbooks last time.

at least this one looks better than the one in 2005.

nice .. but dun .. many use Out glow ler...

i dun like the words... font... style.. mayb

look mine
http://forum.lowyat.net/index.php?showtopic=221397&hl=cover

ermmm
look MINE

http://img357.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20052jpeg0nr.jpg

http://img217.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gaara4gx.jpg

http://img217.imageshack.us/my.php?image=green0cf.jpg

maybe can give u sum idea

cahaya. put bmw angel eye instead

agreed on too much of out glow thingy. get rid of that. maybe can try drop shadow instead to make the text visible.

This post has been edited by maelzx: Feb 20 2006, 07:22 PM

ur design the one got ppl fight wif u wan hor...remember liao

heheheheheh
whos that POKEMON

u need to adjust all thing bro

hahah people smart . just focus what they Really want to.
and . just. Take as a moral dude.
BTW .. ur cover are really ok with ur school material. and what ur want to do is make a good layout. with colour balance

wanna ask sumthang
wher u got da lilin background?
heheheh
pecah wooo pic u stretch like that

umm
where is sekolah seri sentosa?

This post has been edited by Hackezkk: Feb 20 2006, 09:56 PM

hahahahha Seri sentosa pon tak tau ka???
where ur from..???
Bangladess????

u kids pls dont start arguing in other people thread.

usws - try to not using so many glow.. and try to contrast the text ( date, school name ) with the backgound so the words area clear enough to see. use 300 dpi o prevent blur later in your cover.. to see whether it is blur or not.. try pint at a4 with 300 dpi.

yahh 300dpi. is good one
I have ,, got it.

Your fonts are too simple and your effects as well.

Can obviously see it can be done through a gradient overlay/ outer glow.

It is way too simple.

it looks so unprofessional imho

Bewok doh mule jadi bewok

hummm
try emboss da font lil bit

http://img447.imageshack.us/img447/4076/magcoverfinal5fo.gif

seee RADICAL works

kewll
vector art

This post has been edited by Hackezkk: Feb 21 2006, 11:06 AM

The photograph of da candle is not so nice for me.. try 2 put others pictures that can bring 'feel' when people look at ur design..

Eh.. wanna see my design?? this is my skewl mag for the last year..
and Im the person who in-charge for this..

{Perintis 2005 - Sekolah Menengah Kebangsaan Seri Ampang Kuala Lumpur}

This is the design - Using Adobe Photoshop CS2 300DPI



The motif is all about BATIK.. A Tribute to Datin Seri Indon Mahmood..

This is the actual mag.. I jz scanned and put it here.



Ps : Miss the skewl soooo much

kewllll dude
heheheh
but i dun like da smsa in red in glow
haihhh

Uikk why?.. I think okey what..
jz to expose the website 2 the public.. hihi

Another design of my skewl mag.. The 2004 magazine..

where?
i cant see

arghhh
i dun like tat red glow hohohooh

now zeps' stuff is good. the others didnt impress me at all.

especially that gaara one. that has copyright infringement all over it.