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TSusws
post Feb 20 2006, 05:19 PM, updated 20y ago

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What do you think of this... It's for my school magazine with the title 'cahaya'. I'm no pro as you can see so need your advice or comments to make it better (got a lot of pressure!! ) Anyway, forget the badge on the cover.. just testing!!


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TSusws
post Feb 20 2006, 05:21 PM

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By the way, i'm using photoshop!!
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post Feb 20 2006, 05:44 PM

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I prefer the 2nd image but think the typeface could be better.
Tm89
post Feb 20 2006, 05:49 PM

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Can i ask where u get the pics?
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post Feb 20 2006, 06:32 PM

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are you designing a magazine for your school ?? i don't think both designs reflect the school identity.....
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post Feb 20 2006, 06:48 PM

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i think the second one is nicer..

anyway, the design isn't much different from your school yearbooks last time.

at least this one looks better than the one in 2005. sweat.gif
Syfq
post Feb 20 2006, 07:01 PM

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nice .. but dun .. many use Out glow ler...

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post Feb 20 2006, 07:03 PM

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i dun like the words... font... style.. mayb
Syfq
post Feb 20 2006, 07:08 PM

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look mine
http://forum.lowyat.net/index.php?showtopic=221397&hl=cover

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post Feb 20 2006, 07:14 PM

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ermmm
look MINE flex.gif flex.gif

http://img357.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20052jpeg0nr.jpg

http://img217.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gaara4gx.jpg

http://img217.imageshack.us/my.php?image=green0cf.jpg

maybe can give u sum idea
maelzx
post Feb 20 2006, 07:20 PM

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cahaya. put bmw angel eye instead tongue.gif

agreed on too much of out glow thingy. get rid of that. maybe can try drop shadow instead to make the text visible.

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post Feb 20 2006, 07:59 PM

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QUOTE(Navigator® @ Feb 20 2006, 07:08 PM)
ur design the one got ppl fight wif u wan hor...remember liao
Hackezkk
post Feb 20 2006, 09:00 PM

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heheheheheh
whos that POKEMON tongue.gif

u need to adjust all thing bro
Syfq
post Feb 20 2006, 09:27 PM

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hahah people smart . just focus what they Really want to.
and . just. Take as a moral dude.
BTW .. ur cover are really ok with ur school material. and what ur want to do is make a good layout. with colour balance


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post Feb 20 2006, 09:55 PM

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wanna ask sumthang
wher u got da lilin background?
heheheh
pecah wooo pic u stretch like that

umm
where is sekolah seri sentosa?

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Syfq
post Feb 21 2006, 02:26 AM

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hahahahha Seri sentosa pon tak tau ka???
where ur from..???
Bangladess????


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post Feb 21 2006, 02:32 AM

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u kids pls dont start arguing in other people thread.

usws - try to not using so many glow.. and try to contrast the text ( date, school name ) with the backgound so the words area clear enough to see. use 300 dpi o prevent blur later in your cover.. to see whether it is blur or not.. try pint at a4 with 300 dpi. smile.gif
Syfq
post Feb 21 2006, 03:18 AM

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yahh 300dpi. is good one
I have ,, got it.

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post Feb 21 2006, 03:44 AM

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Your fonts are too simple and your effects as well.

Can obviously see it can be done through a gradient overlay/ outer glow.

It is way too simple.
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post Feb 21 2006, 04:30 AM

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it looks so unprofessional imho

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