working on some school assignment. tell me what u all think.

the login bla bla bla thingy on the top right hand side corner punya text is too dark lar... hard for ppl t osee

and the news & events update? why not put it into summary. 3-4 lines of text will be more than enuf. the current onle is congesting the view

color scheme? ok.

hahha yeah i get your drift, neh just wanted the text to feel the box because of the blardy lect

it's neat and beautifully coloured, downside would be the text beside login

nice try ! =)

the logo 'Vilocity Motosports' kind weird.....!!!
i think the meter is upside down....!!!
btw cool haaa...

one more thing about the news paper......
is that business news paper.....u know what i mean....!!!

This post has been edited by 2uk3y: Feb 12 2006, 07:59 PM

hahha yeaps its upside down. yeah will alter the colors on the login area.

maybe u could try making the newspaper and the camera exactly square..
and the red and orange circle.. i don't think they fit..

StonerJuan: wat tools u use for developing the assignment?

haha hthe red and yellow/orange circle was suppose to be the colors of a traffic light but i sitll can't find a place to put the green color.

yingchai : secret

btw, ur "Order Now" button, is order wat? i guess u can add more details on it

hahha yeah u have a point, ahhahha never thought of it.. it was suppose to be order the game.

login and order now could be seperated. now they're on same block, which is rather confusing.

the circle next to the title bars just doesn't seem right. try adding a thin white border or something.

things I'll pick on..

- wasited space above the navigation bar. (you could fit a car there)
- totally agree with the dark text in the box where login/signup is.
- find id/lost password is too small to my liking.
- agree with jayhan over the Order Now button. (even after seeing the overall website, I don't get what could I order from here)
- if there's going to be that much text in a paragrpah for News and Events, increase the leading. (space between lines)
- it's advisable to have 'posted by' or 'posted on' if you're going to put the poster name and date posted or it wouldn't really make sense when you read Title, Author on Date as a single line.
- the stamping of dijidtal looks alright but what message is that suppose to communicate about the car image?

overall, satisfying color scheme and still needs tweaking.

Ganbatte!

layout no bad, but login there not very good ther logo is nice, that rest still need imporved

yes, which is why i suggested splitting up in some way. initially i thought ORDER NOW is for account setup.

maybe can put something like......
Car Customization
- front bumper
- rear bumper
- side skirts
- spoilers
for RM 1,500

FREE Pioneer CD/MP3 player with 6 Disc Changer

ORDER NOW
(offer valid while stocks last)

cool work....dont know what to comment, if u dont mind me asking which skool are u studying in???