#1

#2

#3

#4

#5

#6


Aiks haha my photos too big all the flaws show out ! lol

First pic is my fav but its no sharp !!!!!

wasted =(

This post has been edited by Wholleymolley: Aug 29 2012, 02:36 AM

Noob Cameraman me saw is

1) no.5 try not so low angle due as you look like prevert.
2) Most of photo is Out of focus, I dunoe you problem or autofocusing problem ya..
3.no 5 agan, here face is underexposed, next time try fill in some light first.
4.No.4 try place model at better place because if you not realize, the model head like stick 1 papan sign on top on her head.
5. compo is missing here..

Mind me asking what is the theme for the shoot? Your location is outdoors on the streets at night yet you have your models pose as if they are in a studio? What gives?

Most times the background is busy and distracting and your lighting is not balanced. The background is too dark most of the time creating a bright subject (due to flash) but dark background that cause it to look like it's a snapshot. Then your models' poses are like studio shoots. Makes people really confused.

Your shots do not have any message. What are you trying to show? The model? The background? Their clothes? Their location? Any reason why they are where they are?

When I look at your photos it's telling me : "Model stand here. Pose like this. I shot from here because the background got nice feel." There's no other reasons or story behind the shots.

I think only #6 is acceptable in this series.

if ur 2nd attempt is to achieve worser pictures, yes, u done it

the girls like a very bad photoshop done to put them in the pic

Pic No. 5 is pretty bad! you look like a voyeurism than photographer.

I wonder how your subject feel when looking at your photos.

mayb they see the bokeh background and love that very much

... you guys ...




Either ways

#1 is my fav close up, it has the feel but its no sharp =/

#2 for me is fav WA shot, can be improved if subject is sharper but i shot 1 - 2 second so its kinda difficult unlessi ask model stand absolutely still lo =)

If i go a bit to the right maybe will be better shot coz the lamp post wont lekat to model arm



Next shoot will be better =)

My fav is no2..
i like this shoot a lot...

no.1 also not bad... no sharp also can give different type of image too...nice

keep it up.bro..

Many OOF shot i think?

Not OOF, is he use 1-2 sec exposure.
TS, y not u use softbox or umbrella can liao. no need long exposure and light quality definitely better than any streetlight

i am not photographer, but not nice photo5

Thank you so much ! =) I will try harder !



hehe but if use umbrelli or softbox, the behind that the ambient still can see ?

next time my night shoot i will try with beauty dish plus speedlight la haha

coz my portable strobe too strong d

I am not sure if you guided them on how to pose or they pose themselves. Either way, their posing angles is always odd. Either they twist their legs too much or try too much to look sexy. And the one shooting upwards towards KLCC Twin Towers, her tummy is showing.

to be honest.. all 6 shots cannot make it ... have your models seen the pictures?