try shot at early morning.......

ur mv have the idea, truly speanking, i know myself really cant come out with that idea. but u need to take care on more of the details during shooting, just like state on above, ur own shadow, cars passing by.... (ok, i watch 30 secs only, then i switch to another clip for complete song)

i like tat song, but video wise........................ my eyes pain when watch that, a lot of highlight, over expose for nth

i observe most of ur shots taken at midday, the sunlight is strong and hard, adding with softbox, off flash, sportlight....... all not going to help much on ur result......

i think if u try to shot at 7 or 8 am like that, the lightning will better for the mood u trying to bring out. i hope u get what i mean