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Rate my work : Karnival Kerjaya UTM '06, comment and condemn please
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TSmomochi zabuza
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 Feb 5 2006, 01:00 AM, updated 20y ago
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//entrance good day everyone.. 1st of all i think its not too late to wish all muslim selamat tahun baru maal hijrah and to chinese people happy new year so here are my new work.. karnival kerjaya '06 for UTM.. hope you guys can give comments and condemnns to my work.. i really appreciate it both.. and if can.. tell me what price do you expect for this kinda website.. i just want to know  Karnival Kerjaya UTM '06dont forget to rate it.. thanks a lot and for UTM peeps -- use this userbar .. i made it http://www.flavertmedialab.com/cfair/KK_userbar.jpg so for now thanks in advance  |
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providence
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Feb 5 2006, 07:22 PM
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On my way
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Good work. Add more color to make it more alive. Recommended - try adding some blue color
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TSmomochi zabuza
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Feb 5 2006, 09:23 PM
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since they want only red, black and white.. i cant try other combination color.. however thanks.. after this will try combo of blue red white black .. thanks a lot |
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etsuko
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Feb 5 2006, 10:30 PM
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Spaced out person
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urm.. i can't exactly find where is the navigation at first.
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TSmomochi zabuza
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Feb 5 2006, 10:33 PM
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eh i tot i hv put " click red triange to begin"
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etsuko
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Feb 6 2006, 10:00 AM
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Spaced out person
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i meant after that.. i needed to locate the navigation because everything to me felt tightly attached.
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siaukia
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Feb 6 2006, 11:00 AM
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hm, possibly what he meant is the placement of every object doesnt seem to compliment each other instead it's very 'tight'. My advice if you want to improve, possible margins and spacing among objects (using of grid) would be really helpful. hierarchy is important also to ensure that you can direct user to locate which object to click first and what comes next (theoritically easy to say, practically when want to apply i always forgot  ) |
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TSmomochi zabuza
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Feb 6 2006, 12:50 PM
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noted down.. thanks both of you indeed it is a" tight" to think back again . |
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Enferno
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Feb 12 2006, 01:18 AM
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the main page really makes me blur.. dunno where to enter the appropriate site...
but the IT Fair site is really good.. minus the navigation arrow.. really can c that..keke...
anyway... good job man...
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TSmomochi zabuza
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Feb 12 2006, 01:21 AM
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enferno - thanks.. but i tot with " click red triagle to begins' shud be easier for user to locate where it is.
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TSmomochi zabuza
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Feb 12 2006, 01:21 AM
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enferno - thanks.. but i tot with " click red triagle to begins' shud be easier for user to locate where it is. anyhow thank again
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zeist
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Feb 12 2006, 01:27 AM
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True, your main page abit headache.  |
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fansoption
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Feb 13 2006, 11:34 AM
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the logo no relly nice
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ikram_zidane
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Feb 15 2006, 06:13 PM
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you can lower the opacity for the bar's shadow....
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Shiitake
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Feb 15 2006, 06:27 PM
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woaaa..nice work man!!!
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POYOZER
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Feb 15 2006, 07:40 PM
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how much the pay that u get??  *padhal dah tanya...lagi mau tanya lagi This post has been edited by POYOZER: Feb 15 2006, 07:40 PM |
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tsg
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 Feb 15 2006, 07:42 PM
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QUOTE(momochi zabuza @ Feb 5 2006, 01:00 AM) //entrance good day everyone.. 1st of all i think its not too late to wish all muslim selamat tahun baru maal hijrah and to chinese people happy new year so here are my new work.. karnival kerjaya '06 for UTM.. hope you guys can give comments and condemnns to my work.. i really appreciate it both.. and if can.. tell me what price do you expect for this kinda website.. i just want to know Karnival Kerjaya UTM '06dont forget to rate it.. thanks a lot and for UTM peeps -- use this userbar .. i made it http://www.flavertmedialab.com/cfair/KK_userbar.jpgso for now thanks in advance 1st saw it was created by u..then remember your site eye cathcy scripts ehhh..i like it like that u should design for my dept website then |
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TSmomochi zabuza
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Feb 15 2006, 11:13 PM
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zeist - maybe ebcause of the pack & tight style.. huhu fansoption - at first i hv design the logo but they reject it and give this logo.. they oso said follow this logo so i guess it couldn't be helped  ikram_zidane - noted. thx and congrates man. shiitake - thanks.. POYOZER - i know la ur 3D is damn cool.. kasik la aku seringgit dua tsg - knight rider.. i love.  :D btw if you have a place for internship.. can try la .. coz starting June i'm starting my internship.. currently got one place to do.. but my skill majorly in falsh la.. PHP ASp... haih dunno so much //early promotion -- flavert medialab v3 |
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TSmomochi zabuza
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Feb 23 2006, 12:37 PM
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today is a normal day.. i wake up and check lowyat as usual.. and i found this.  Thank god.. and thanks to lowyat.net, especially the communities of arts & design and thank to committee to UTM careerfair too. have to improve more still long way to do.. still so much to do. // offtopic - searching for internship next june.. where got ah ? |
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Feb 24 2006, 05:38 PM
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Eh.. it was done by you.. I thought UTM asked Lasso again.. good work |
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