this is not finish yet..... poster about upcoming green carnation tour for the end records.... feel free to comment.....



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cool.... very grungy..

i love it....really loveit!!!!!

Love the texture.. but the text needs some work to finish it..

^agreed, the typography seems not that matching the feels of the image

yeap i agree...actually i want to make a classic with swirl font but they want to use a default band logo so i don`t have any idea right now.....

pretty..like a horror theme

cool! how u mix with the texture? great man...

i like it...maybe u can try a more grungy font...something like Grunge Aching Bold,Grunge Caltek Bold,Serrific Grunge, Basic Grunge..i think they'll look better with the current one you have for the wordings " Acoustic Verses "
but i really love it...wonderfully blended in...thumbs up!!!Bravos!!

Nice BG... Just the text doesn't really match the BG... Nice work.

some humble comments:

1. the 'green carnation' title font could use the 'graffiti' type. like need for speed

2. since yr overall theme is the scribbly thingy, u could do that for the edges of the people esp of the guy on the right (his hair)

3. also the positioning of the bald guy in the middle of the back guy's groin (ugh)

nice... btw..can't see really well the bald guy leg...does he had any ?? overall...it still look nice

This post has been edited by atria83: Dec 28 2005, 10:48 AM

your shading/ shadowing of the guys in the pic make it blend with the bg. Cos they just look so amature-ish sticking out like that.

waw... cool.. i like that.. how do you make the texture huh?

thanks for all comments..... i`ll try to make into more detail looking..... especially the guys+bg blending plus that font/band logo......

like tv -^-^-^-

er....too green..... and all dry and dying trees........ I can't find any focus of attention.....

This post has been edited by Koala: Jan 1 2006, 03:26 PM

font not suitable and touch up d pic alil more on d edges...it looks like a cutout from somewhere...try blending it wit the texture in d back and touch up the background...don juz align it in d center...try distort it alil...and one more problem...no focus...change it and u can c d difference...trust me...

This post has been edited by mystic_orgs: Jan 7 2006, 03:24 PM

no bad keep it up

The man's face too white....

Needs a more gothic/heaver look, don't use italics or condensed fonts, looks filmsy, the words have to be firm.

Ya try use gothic font and see??

by the way nice background

This post has been edited by andriel: Jan 16 2006, 09:25 PM

Grunge brushes...
You can make your own, or you can download them off the net.