Been very long since I last shared, decided to dig back some old albums and share it here

As usual, do CnC

All shots are taken with NikonD7000 + 35mm 1.8G + SB 900

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Thanks to the Model for the actions

#1 blurry.

#2 don't understand why is the flash gun in the picture.

I find only #7 is nice but can't see the bad guy's face nicely. The flash gun is more like directly fired at models. You can probably reduce the power if you wanna directly fire at them.

pic2 the flash there it blind my eyes.

at 1st i tot wholleymolley

the last pic still ok ma, got intensity in the picture

+1

Honestly, the model need to do some homework..

At least know what the modelling is about..learn how to hold a gun correctly e.g
#3 - u don't put 2 fingers on the trigger
#4 - the pose look stupid IMO..'my right hand wan shoot left, my left hand wan shoot right..i'm confused' (watched too much action movie la)
#3, 5 - the eyes; don't overdo it..they don't work everytime..i prefer her to have the glasses on instead

#7 is good but could be better..i would prefer it to be composed either wider or tighter..now like half half...

#2 can be further improved with the composition. the lighting is good. but you need to exclude it from view ( unless you put real life object like lamp )

#7 composition is good. just that, the lighting is bad on the guy's face. It would be better if you have another flash with lower power or used a reflectors.

Come on, stop to give all stupid comment. Don't make any sense.

Thanks for our comments!! I didnt notice that the flash gun will be the distraction of the picture. Will take note of it next time

What molley???

Thanks for your comment!


Sorry is my mistake that i did not communicate with the model enough!! Will avoid the same thing again next round!
yea..was thinking the same thing after you pointed that out!! Time to buy a reflector

I accept any comment as long as it helps me to grow bro!!

but 1 thing about the pistol position, imo, please learn from Chow Yun Fat if u havent watched his movie b4, if the eyes are not in the line of sight with the guns, then there shud be at least some expression showing the "intend" for pointing the gun at someone! there should also be more "weight" while wielding the gun and not just holding the toy gun

eh where u bought the black glock with laser??? is the chamber movable? by gas or spring?

Hahaha...chill bro. Did i offended u or something? if i did, i apologize for it

I'm just here to browse pics and give my stupiak and worthless comment (not even worth 2cents ) if such thread r really meant for so..

Can you guide me of what my stupiak comment that don't make any sense?

Ok here it is, when it comes to sexy wear as the model has, you have to pose her to show the sexiness of hers.

She has belly shown and long fair legs I assume, why you keep asking her to duck? Standing position would be great enough to show how good she is.

Despite of pose, mix up your shoots with candid. Finding something blocking your view and shoot. She is in war, or fight or whatever, make the scene looks more aggressive.

Just my humble opinion.

Hmm ... background is a bit off for me though, I recommend you the sg buloh multilevel abandon building, for sure will epic win this theme =)



Other than that fantastic model you got there

Last pic my fav