Hello Folks!

Just sharing a recent shoot I did over the weekend. Something that I haven't shot before, so everything seems pretty new to me.

Can be considered that I'm still pretty new to Photography, so would hope for constructive comments so that I can further improve myself! Thanks!

My flickr page: http://www.flickr.com/photos/kytz/
My blogspot: http://k-ytz.blogspot.com/
My 500px: http://500px.com/kytz

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IMG_0054 by -kytz-, on Flickr

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IMG_0105 by -kytz-, on Flickr

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IMG_0116 by -kytz-, on Flickr

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IMG_0195 - Copy-2 by -kytz-, on Flickr

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IMG_0134 by -kytz-, on Flickr

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IMG_0152 PS2-2 by -kytz-, on Flickr

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IMG_0168 by -kytz-, on Flickr

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IMG_0233-2 by -kytz-, on Flickr

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IMG_0239 by -kytz-, on Flickr

This post has been edited by -kytz-: Mar 2 2012, 06:43 PM

where the location for 1st picture?

bro, #7, u never help her zip properly ar?

for some reason, i dont really like such distracting background, my eyes seems to be searching for something in the ruins and not towards the model, not sure if it's only me...

This post has been edited by adam_lss: Mar 2 2012, 07:43 PM

I think number #6 is nice.
and other pic background macam too distracting like what adam_lss said. actually I'm good with background, but I think compositional plays a factor here. ( I still new to portrait duno how to describe it)

I think you should include depth of field next time. helps viewer to have a better feel of the picture. ( I duno how to say the word, using feel to type )


like this http://fotop.net/dragon_baby/Agnes_Lim2

offtopic: where's the place located?

This post has been edited by xCM: Mar 3 2012, 10:52 AM

hot model i see

where is the location?

all photos r great for beginner, try improve on DOF and put the 'focus' more to the model, not the environment

I like what I see but you seems to have run out of steam editing the series especially #8 and #9. Keep it up bro, you are doing well.

actually there's two techniques i learned from my tutor on portrait photography.

1) close up, tight.
2) wide angle, far away.

here's an example, a pic i shot back then with ClericKilla and Riggo (Ringgo? a Leica user in the Leica thread).

The term "try improve on DOF" seems very confusing to me. What do you mean by "improving DOF? Do you want pics with shallower Depth Of Field (only model in focus/background blur) or pics with larger Depth Of Field (everything in focus)

Ahhh i know where this is... cuz i remember the demolished bricks since its one of my team's work

This post has been edited by R a D ! c 4 L: Mar 30 2012, 01:20 AM

nice series...btw...pic 9 looks like one of the scene from NFS...there is one track looks like that...haha..

Actually I felt that the outfit doesn't really fit the location~ ><

Where is this building?

Wah, kytz sifu
I don't really know how to comment at my stage, they are all so nice~
Keep it up man~~

Haha thanks bro!

I don't really shoot much nowadays, these are all that I have for the past 2 years (started in 2011)

http://www.flickr.com/photos/kytz/collecti...57632336971156/

colour and exposure are spot on

i think to improve, shoot lower and use a wider lens to capture more of the surroundings

That time didn't have UWA yet, now already got but seldom shoot portrait already