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My full work is composed of a collection of photos to tell the story of the matchbox girl, should you have an interest in the full story told pictorially please feel free to visit my full work here



I would really appreciate it if you can let your thoughts be known to me in this thread after you have seen my work.




The Children Bedtime Story ~ The Little Match Girl

Summary :

The is a little girl sells matchboxes on a cold day but nobody buys matches from her so she cant go home coz she afraid she will beaten

Cold, weak and hungry, she huddled in a corner, then idea struck her that she can warm herself using the matches she sell

She lit the matches and she saw some wonderful things ( maybe due to the conditions on her body at that moment due to extreme cold )

In the morning, passers by discovered the little girl frozen to death on the streets with a smile on her face

Full story - http://www.storyit.com/Classics/Stories/matchgirl.htm

This post has been edited by Wholleymolley: Feb 25 2012, 09:49 PM

my 2 cents. thats some really bad lighting

Gezzz is it just me or i feel like watching prawn??

Need to adjust lighting properly, looks fake.. and the last pic need more light... that mancis brings back my childhood memories

This post has been edited by mirzan007: Feb 25 2012, 09:55 PM

the first picture so terrible , the face and the body TOTALLY different expose =.="

the face look dark , and the body look bright

just my 2 cents

Wholleymolley, i propose that u organize a session and invite few of us to shoot as well, then we compare each others' shots!

I like the story behind the photos; it's very concise. Just curious are you doing it with existing light. Since the story depicts the night scenario of the theme, artificial light might make it looks fake.

Natural existing light is the way to go. However, that is a challenge since you might get blur shake and inconsistent light. You need to get adjusted frequently to get the best lighting for this. Try more effort and new things again.

from bad to worst

Hope this is my last reply for him...

PLEASE find someone is good enough in photography or take a workshop to practice basic on taking photos.
We knew that you have passion on photography and WANT TO PROMO YOUR "FAMECHERRY.COM" to sell your camera accessories.

if you still take "Sh*t" photos & want famous in the near future, maybe we can help you become another "拖车姐" immediately.

I wish I can get that much of replies within one day

story telling or photoshooting? I can only see the model's face in the first picture.

compositional- I can see you stand and take all those picture.
lighting- blue-ish cast all picture. and light does not fall on right place.

picture #7. what?

actually the picture you shown here I could have just do the same job with just a digital camera. do you know that? using DSLR does not show you pro or what, you just own a expensive camera.

Haha..this is Hilarious. With storyline some more. So funny. Personally I think if you make it as a slide show with story telling as a back drop would works..at least not so many critics.

I wished I didn't click into this. You have not improved and it's doing injustice to your models.

u can do better.. keep learning..

bro, u snap like HM then you'll get alot of reply like him ... best~~~

You already have Danny T ,who is a good photographer, as your shooting partner. Learn from him lar~

This post has been edited by -kytz-: Mar 1 2012, 06:22 PM

what the.... so creepy.. sheesh