ahmois FTW~!!! 1.4 go play somewhere else

can trade F1.4 for amois...?

i also agree, no amoi, f1.4 also no use...

I got this amoi (eh, wait.... that sounds so wrong. ), at F10.0.


Shasha by Sham Kien Yee, on Flickr

zstan: I'm liking the vibrant color. Though the tilt in #1 is a bit off and you could probably zoom in to get just one 'box' of background in #1, since the tiles are wet and unsightly. That would also reduce barrel distortion.

In #3 why not a tele, and from directly in front?

michael9413: Maybe you can get a shot of #7 from directly in front, with the baskets on both sides of her and the handle to frame her.

azamunekurone: Wah didn't know you shoot JPG! Good zoom, like 600mm on full frame!

NutZ748: Whoa weird - didn't know Sony Alphas would have banding in high ISO. I hope you have a RAW version of this as different RAW converters will make noise look different!

fansoption: I wonder what it would look like from the left - in front of the grasshopper's face.

shootkk: Seems a bit tight?

Zhao: Nice! You might want to do a tighter crop, crop away all the clues that it is a real park. For example Staircase on the right can crop. #3 is more like it.

Mikeshashimi: Looks like you'd want to do a classic multiple exposure HDR - one more to expose for the shadows, reducing noise.

Newbieeeeee: #1 a bit unharmonious in crop. Nice #2 though #3 is a weird passer-by shot. Would be nice to read the back in #4. Color would help identify #5 and #7.

What's going on in #8? #9 could be shot from directly in front, at a 45 degree angle so you just see 2 colored shapes. #10 clone stamp it lah.

chiahau: So are you married, semi married or going to get married?

ieR: Although the cushion isn't the best looking, because of the wide angle, I feel like I am standing on front of her and I can feel the cushion.

Also a wider shot on #2 could show the man behind approaching suspiciously.

sugaring: Since you're desaturating, you might as well lower the contrast. Actually, lowering the contrast would be better, and doing a minor Gaussian blur.

#1 looks like you focussed on her crown instead of her eyes.... so soft. #3 can do with a reflector from the right.
   

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Added on January 10, 2012, 4:32 pmp/s: Penang Kaki want to TT on 12th night? Me & masta Templar will be having coffee in S.Prai area.

Now you know why you need a reflector. And why are you using 10fps? Isn't the model, posing for you? 

sugaring : Learn how to use slow sync flash to freeze movement... and still get some motion blur... I've never tried it with a person and in daylight before but it works great with light trails...

Maybe I should try it someday...

er how fast is the ballet turn? 1fps also can get the shot liao mar. 

Ooooo. How did compiling worked out? Is it the one you posted?

sugaring: #1 could also be shot tighter, cropped at the elbow. #2 window very kecoh. Nice #3 though not with the motion blur. #4 again background kecoh.

your vignetting is a quite unnatural IMHO

underexposed

1. meter the face, set to spot metering, AEL the face, that way u get a good face exposure (ignoring the BG eV)
2. careful when shooting in "green zone" aka, green leaves plants greeeen. the photo is tinted with green, the skin is like hulk. can be repair from photoshop via 'color balance' putting some magenta back.