Hello sifu's,

This is round 2 spam of pictures , I hope this is not too underexposed compared to the one I posted entitled "Penny - The Sunrise Girl". Here's my latest work "Mocha- The Sweet Girl" , the title might sound a little childish couldn't think of any better titles..

Meet Mocha altho I prefer cappuccino , please give your comments and critiques on what should I improve on future whether in editing or taking those moments.

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i think u can find better angles ... overall seems ok

keep shooting!!!

im not a pro but #3 pose seems not natural and make her look fat.

Well..just my opinion
#1 - messy water reflection -> Distraction
#2 - too many rocks -> Distraction
#3 - uninteresting background, chopped hand and leg
#4 - too many rocks -> Distraction
#5 - hmmm...too wide for a potrait..and the body parts all cramped into the center