hi all... wanna share some photos with u guyz..
tips n feedbacks r really appreciated..
thx in advance..!!

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This post has been edited by do_re_mi: Jun 14 2012, 10:47 PM

#1 - flash is too harsh...

#4 - dunno y.. it makes me feel strange.. how come obama works for japan as ultraman??? @_@

#1. Flash exposure too high, mybe lower the ISO a bit.
#5. It's much nicer if you focus the patung in the middle, looks cooler, but mybe that's just me.
u got the basics, sharpen it. Nice job.

ohyah, next time included all the details such as, ISO, exposure, etc..

This post has been edited by 3$0N: Sep 15 2011, 10:20 AM

- dont use harsh flash, strong shadow is annoying. try fill in flash for not too bright n not too dark.

- always check for a better background to isolate the subject. that'll be a strong focal point for the subject without disturbance.

-as for pic number 5, why dont u focus at the middle subject. green color. it'll nicer as playing with bokeh n foreground.

thanks guys 4 ur comments..
yeah.. #1 & #5 shud b better..

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Added on September 19, 2011, 12:49 pm2nd series - vw das auto show..
too late to post photo bout that autoshow? hope not..
as olwayz, tips n feedbacks from u guyz r really appreciated..
tq in advance..!!

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This post has been edited by do_re_mi: Sep 19 2011, 12:49 PM

ideally, a good series of photos always convey an overall picture of how the environment or some hidden meaning to leave a very deep feel on viewer. no doubt das auto shots are relatively much better imho.

lighting is good, but if u abuse it, it will tend to convert your artwork into P&S grade.

p.s. Obama in ultraman really caught my attention haha, i was wondering why, and kind of leave my focus on the subsequent photos.

thx for ur comment
care to elaborate more??

series of photos should be able to express the environment well, gave the viewer a feel of how does the car show environment is, if the subject is mainly on the cars, then each angle of shot must be able to paint the overall picture of how the car looks like. in my opinion, closed up is to show people specific area whereby viewer is always keen to see more...

e.g. interior design, rims details, break caliper, front grill, you got almost all right, but not complete.

as for lighting, please bounce or diffuse instead of direct hit; which create the reflection effect or over-exposed (enable the highlight indicator on the picture preview will do the story telling).

after long time hibernate..
3rd series - super gt panning shots

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c & c r really appreciated
thanks 4 viewing..


This post has been edited by do_re_mi: Jun 14 2012, 11:22 PM

Too overexposed? Lower the exposure since you have a good red glowing disc brake there

no 9 is money shot.. just lower the exposure as ^ said..

may i know which spot in sepand did you shoot no 9 ??

cheers

hmm..ditto..overexposed..

@fantagero - location = back straight, juz b4 last corner.. usual spot for many photographers i guess..