QUOTE(Adamiquesce @ Sep 11 2011, 10:19 PM)
I think the nose is okay,no need to worry about it,just the line work and the shading is wrong.
Agito's idea of changing the drawing to his own preference is not good,it neglected the original artist's way of drawing.
I mean thats not anime.Try to work on the line at the nose part.
To spice up ur drawing,add more details on the eyes and the lips,also the necklace.
this one i tidak membantah
but then if wan fix it, really need goes a lot fixing...
well now i point some thing wrong there har...
@sai91
1) eyes, looks like a half open eyes. usually saw in buddha statue only. those eyes giving a calm/dead/not energic feel. so kinda weird to put on ah moi there.
2) hair... err not sure is your style or what... because on top part of hair looks suitable for short hair but you draw a long one so it giving a messed up hair style. and ya shading need put a lot effort,
3) shading, same with above, it does ruin a lot your image. a wrong shading will affect a lot. so ya accurate shading does help a lot.
4) lines, shaking lines....

5) neck, not sure the shading ruin it or what, it does giving a fat neck for me XD
6) lips. need more "roundish" edge a bit and ya SHADING again to make it more sexy