not only nose need to fix oh, it whole picture need to fix oh 

this is i follow your angle and my style la, the nose of course simplified a lot.
i cincai do one    got many place is not solid one haahhaha 

tutorial might help you
http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=nose%20tut...rder=9&offset=0

I think the nose is okay,no need to worry about it,just the line work and the shading is wrong.
Agito's idea of changing the drawing to his own preference is not good,it neglected the original artist's way of drawing.
I mean thats not anime.Try to work on the line at the nose part.
To spice up ur drawing,add more details on the eyes and the lips,also the necklace.

this one i tidak membantah 
but then if wan fix it, really need goes a lot fixing...
well now i point some thing wrong there har...

@sai91
1) eyes, looks like a half open eyes. usually saw in buddha statue only. those eyes giving a calm/dead/not energic feel. so kinda weird to put on ah moi there.
2) hair... err not sure is your style or what... because on top part of hair looks suitable for short hair but you draw a long one so it giving a messed up hair style. and ya shading need put a lot effort,
3) shading, same with above, it does ruin a lot your image. a wrong shading will affect a lot. so ya accurate shading does help a lot.
4) lines, shaking lines....
5) neck, not sure the shading ruin it or what, it does giving a fat neck for me XD
6) lips. need more "roundish" edge a bit and ya SHADING again to make it more sexy 

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nah, proper a bit shading does affect much XD
i m not good yet.

and if you are lazy do detail what for go realism lol.
and i think you go trace photo first, or use a photo do a "paint over" to understand the flow.

i also need do that...just  i also lazy 

The only thing Im not lazy when doing it is drawing,I can waste alot of times when doing it,it is so fun.
Other than that,I am lazy,Im a lazyass,study also lazy.

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Added on September 11, 2011, 10:56 pm
That what I was talking about,props to you.

here's what i think and what i could offer my advice to you
no offense seriously
dont do fan art for now
you need to learn how to sketch and draw the proper way before you go for any stylized method
skulls-you need to draw alot of them
front side back top
understand how one face structure works
nose ear mouth eye
individually practice on them
no fancy angle of your artwork for now
it might be boring at 1st,but believe me when the result come out
you'll be satisfied

why you facepalm?

normal round brush ...

sai dont have any kind o brush lo
all same 1

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Added on October 2, 2011, 5:22 pm
almost forgot to post this,

its been weeks

this is the original sketch



this is the color version

mieh

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Added on October 17, 2011, 2:40 am
no tablet? use mouse (MX518)  (i cropped the NSFW parts away )
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haha yea..that mouse is gooding man..its like using wacom..too bad it dun hav pressure sensivity? XD