I have to say, I think you're on the wrong track. You might try to attempt to have some amount of structure to everything that you play. Work on your ears, learning tunes from the CD's or your media player rather than just from tab. A metronome may help with your rhythm. Thanks for at least having the guts to post your playing.

you may need to play something with more fluency and meaning as opposed to scale runs and whammy tricks. You seem to have the ingredients to become a good player, but let your ears do the walking without the flash.